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by Thanatos02
Tue Oct 23, 2012 11:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/23]

Act 2 - Part 5-2: Great Expectations “Whoa there, relax.” Her eyes shut and she tilts her head back and forth, popping her neck as she debates in her head whether to waste her time with someone like me. Words stir around in her mouth as she tries to think of the proper response; be it a denial or a...
by Thanatos02
Tue Oct 23, 2012 11:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/23]

Alright 2-5 coming right up More Akira this time, which I'm sure is a relief for those who just read part 4. 10/23: I'm going to go ahead and cut the rant about her father out of here, and save it for later down the line when it's more relevant. It just feels like a major plot device instead of for...
by Thanatos02
Tue Oct 23, 2012 7:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route

“So does my sister, and yet I've run into you more than I've seen here this week.” she answers. I believe that should be her and not here (I've had a few issues with putting extra letters into a word, as well as hitting the caps lock key instead of a on the keyboard). Will fix, thanks for pointing ...
by Thanatos02
Tue Oct 23, 2012 6:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/23]

Act 2 - Part 4-3: A Spark Ignited The waitress scrawls our orders onto a small notepad and leaves us with a 'be right back', disappearing into a pair of kitchen doors. “So, are you enjoying yourself so far? Learn anything?” Mutou asks. “I wouldn't really say it's so much fun as it is educational.” ...
by Thanatos02
Tue Oct 23, 2012 6:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/23]

Act 2 - Part 4-2: A Spark Ignited ...What. Three dimensions? Four dimensions? Screw that, there's TEN DIMENSIONS. NO, ELEVEN. GENERAL RELATIVITY AND QUANTUM MECHANICS. TACHYONS. COMPACTIFICATION. THE UNIVERSE IS A SYMPHONY OF VIBRATING STRINGS. TWANGIN' THE STRING TURNS ELECTRONS INTO NEUTRINOS. NE...
by Thanatos02
Tue Oct 23, 2012 6:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/23]

This one is really narrative heavy, and I'll be the first to admit admit that it's mostly filler because I suck at writing the "in-between" stuff. Originally I planned for just part 1 and 2 to be stage-setting chapters, and then that turned into 1-4, and now pretty much all of scenes 1-6 ...
by Thanatos02
Tue Oct 23, 2012 12:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route

Note to self: pay attention to post size in the future. This isn't pastebin. Act 2 - Part 3-2: Black Coffee “Hey. I remember you; you’re the woman I met at the suit shop.” I reply. “Yeah, fancy that. I didn't think I'd run into you again.” she responds. Yuuko looks between us, head tilted as she tr...
by Thanatos02
Tue Oct 23, 2012 12:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route

nemz wrote:I, um... read ahead. :mrgreen: It's good stuff, and I'm rather digging this version of Hisao!
I'm glad you're liking it so far!
by Thanatos02
Mon Oct 22, 2012 11:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route

Act 2 - Part 3-1: Black Coffee Everything lies still as sun bleeds in through the window, painting the room with light. A stack of homework sits on a desk next to the bed, its silent cries to be completed falling upon metaphorically deaf ears. Instead of studying, completing homework, or generally ...
by Thanatos02
Mon Oct 22, 2012 9:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route

YourFavAnon wrote:>Not making your avatar something suggestive
I had the idea with multiple images, but I can't decide which girl I should make a lewd avatar out of.
by Thanatos02
Mon Oct 22, 2012 8:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route

Act 2 - Part 2-2: Gathering Information The lunch bell doesn’t come any sooner, despite the fact that I managed to stay immersed in the lesson all throughout class. Maybe time only flies if you're having fun. Or maybe it has to do with that thing about time being a relative concept that depends on-...
by Thanatos02
Mon Oct 22, 2012 6:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route

Act 2 - Part 2-1: Gathering Information “So you split your equation into two halves, the reducing half, and the oxidizing half...” For the first time all week; I'm able to pay attention in class. Today's lesson involves oxidation-reduction reactions, a subject that elicits an even lower amount of f...
by Thanatos02
Mon Oct 22, 2012 10:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route

Act 2 - Part 1-2: A New Beginning The sound of exhaust spewing into the air fills my ears as the bus takes off, carrying myself and about thirty other people into the city a couple of miles away. I've actually been needing a suit for a while now, so this is a good thing. My parents approved as well...
by Thanatos02
Sun Oct 21, 2012 10:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route

Act 2 - Part 1-1: A New Beginning Why did I have to sit next to the window? I don't even remember most of what happened yesterday. I woke up around noon because of the festival outside and moped around looking for something to do. Then I ran into Kenji, he wanted someone to hang out with, so I deci...
by Thanatos02
Sun Oct 21, 2012 10:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 713201

Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]

First and foremost, an introduction is in order, since this is my first time coming to these forums. My name is Thanatos02, or just Thanatos. Usually I'm found on a certain imageboard in their Katawa Shoujo general threads, but I decided I'd drop by here and see what things are like on the other en...