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Loving this. Especially the change of what has already been established as Rika. Don't get me wrong, I love Rikabro's fic. It's just that I like seeing variety and different character development such as this one. Keep it up man.

Yep. I thought about it for a little bit and I realized that your story is THE ONLY fic that I have to keep re-reading as I wait for the updates, but it's not a bad thing. The wait is always worth the update.....

And also reading the comments gives me a good laugh...swimsuits guys? lol

Mirage_GSM wrote:Hey, the last update was not even a week ago.
It's a bit soon to get impatient, isn't it?

I don't know man. Some of these fics are so good, I get impatient right after reading the latest update.

Once again, you succeed and I am more captivated then ever with this latest chapter. It's a good refresher to see how Akira is feeling and her perspective on the whole situation at hand.

Mirage_GSM wrote: Even if it were a recognized medical condition I'm not sure an addiction would get him accepted in Yamaku since it is a mental problem.

Who said anything about going to Yamaku for adrenaline addiction? lol

You know, Mental diseases like Alzheimer won't get him accepted into Yamaku :D I don't think I did a very good job trying to exemplify his addiction here :( Last night when I swerved off the road, I thought to myself, 'If I were to die right now, would it be because this is how I was destined to di...

Once again, thank you to those who have been editing the story so far for me and putting up with all my crap! It has been very helpful and well appreciated! Comments, advice, opinions and PMs are also highly encouraged...........Just don't stomp on my work.... I WILL FIND YOU --------------------- P...

Feedback and constructive criticism is highly encouraged. --------------------------------------------------------------- Pt. 2 New sounds arise and take the place of others. *clank* "Get up!" says an unknown voice. "I said get up!" I slowly open my eyes to reveal tarnished metal...

Mirage_GSM wrote:Not much to comment on storywise yet...


It definitely should NOT be done if you seperate one sentence into two paragraphs that way

Thanks, I will make sure to correct that on future chapters. I appreciate the feedback

I doubt that a lot of people had read this, let alone take it seriously. My friend and I had worked on it together as a English project loosely based on how he grew up with minor changes to fit the Katawa Shoujo world. I am no longer continuing this fic because he felt it was becoming too personal t...

Interesting.....well, im pretty sure there will be conflict between hanako and Lily but i sincerely hope its not an extremely over the top one time argument like I've seen in a few other fics. This conflict seems like it would be more in depth and hopefully more of a major obstacle.

and the days seem to come slower and slower as we all wait for the next update....damn

Ive been waiting to read this route for so long. I made the mistake of reading Thanatos' Akira route before it was completed now im hooked. As soon as I did begin to read this, my laptop broke and I don't think ill accomplish the same amount of feels from my tablet.......I need to read this simply b...

Just read this on you're pastebin. I made sure to turn off my tv and lights while I read so I could get the full effect. Amazing as always. Initially I felt like Hisao was being a total jerk, but now its actually hitting me how passionate he has become in you're fic. This chapter leaves so much room...

Exactly!! Haha. Im still checking