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Your first fanfic :shock: Orders of magnitude better than my first! I didn’t tell him the truth. I confessed my feelings, even while I knew it was doomed from the start. What kind of a monster am I? One who deserves to be alone in the end I suppose. I thought it was a shame that she didn't explore w...

I read this, went out and did some grocery shopping then came back and read it again and my heart is breaking for poor Misha. It was bad enough that Shizune didn't even get her a card for Christmas, which made her sad enough to lock herself in her room for the evening, but when Shizune did get round...

Zerebos wrote: ↑Thu Jan 03, 2019 7:24 pm “Hisao, you have multiple sweater vests. One is bad enough, but you have multiple.”

Ikuno, if a sweater vest is good enough for Jimmy Page, then it's good enough for Hisao!

Really enjoyed this, nice to see Ikuno getting some love

Lap wrote: ↑Sun Dec 30, 2018 12:09 am The user manual had seemingly been written in Urdu and translated to Japanese by way of Norwegian

Hey, that's my secret technique for naturally flowing prose

Another great update, thanks for posting!!

Enjoyed reading this, looking forward to seeing how it develops. I've only finished Fruit of Grisaia (still reading through Labyrinth) and I don't recall any mention or signs of Kazuki having trouble with her eyes, is that something that comes up in a later VN? And yeah, don't judge the VN by the an...

Hisao slinks along the corridor, head down, a hunted expression on his face. He has arrived at his classroom just after school is due to start but before Mutou usually makes an appearance, hoping that he will be able to avoid the unsettling encounters that have been a feature of the last few days. H...

I have to admit, this made me squirm at first. Yuuko is a chracter I've never written before, nor do I desire too again. Once I settled down to writing this however I really had a lot of fun with it! I hope you enjoy it Scroff and have a fantastic Christmas and New Year! Thank-you so much for this ...

Lap wrote: ↑Fri Dec 21, 2018 10:28 am Heh. Saved by the boobs.

All hail our saviour!

Really enjoying this, thanks for posting.

I loved Akira's Surprise, having read Home on AO3 it was more of a "how" rather than "what" sort of a story, but that didn't affect my enjoyment one bit. To me, her real surprise was that Hanako was the driving force! Mission Log: Discovery of the Snow Butterfly made me laugh, an...

Glorious!

I've got a story outline in my queue that also characterises Lilly as cynical and manipulative, but I don't need to write it now

Your English is many times better than my French and I never struggled to understand what you were saying (writing?).

But playing thrash metal on a Jaguar? Really??

Thank-you both for the kind words! The other story I'm working on atm has Lilly back in Japan so I wanted to write something to see if I could make sense of her return - if I couldn't then I'd have to rethink. Seems like it isn't too far fetched or out of character, which is a relief!

She sits on her bed with tears running down her face, finally expressing the feelings that have been threatening to overwhelm her for what seems like an age. Despite being alone in the house she does not abandon herself to her emotions: there are tears but nothing more. Even so the friends she left ...

I feel you've captured a feeling of mono no aware very well, and they both exhibit impressive amounts of gaman. I had a strong emotional response to this, going to take me a while to pin down why though.

Thank-you!

I dunno, Marain is a bit too much like Newspeak for my liking