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Scissorlips wrote:Future Blind
“I'm not going to graduate.” I whisper.

I feel Death gently nodding behind me.

“I'm sorry.” He says.

And then I wake up.

Wait, what?

Why must you always leave so many questions unanswered, man ;_;.

This is a very well written fiction so far. Intrigued to see the next part. I normally don't like the script type format for fics, but it actually works somewhat nicely with the way you're writing. Keep it up.

I think this story would have benefited if it had been a bit longer. The introduction of conflict felt forced and unnatural. For example, why would Lilly walk out of the bedroom half-naked, if Hisao just went to open the door? Could have been anyone. And that's not even considering, that Lilly's he...

Hold up one minute. *BackRound Noises* FUCK TO THE YEAH WOOH *End Background Noises* Ahem, That story was well built and followed a good path. I like how you gave Hisao some Balls to stand up for Lilly. I'm glad you liked it. After my first edit of the piece, I sort of questioned the section becaus...

Don't Hide These Feelings My eyes slowly peel open, rubbing off the crust of sleep. Sunlight is streaming in through the single window on the left side of the bedroom, cascading through the blinds and laying softly on our bed. Lilly is cozily snuggled up against my side, arms around my waist and he...

Nice stories. The snowball story is fun, but I'm most interested in "Walk" since it's something that hasn't been done before. Just my luck that it's the only unfinished one. I have plans on completing a second part this week. Not entirely sure yet if I only want it to go two or three part...

Take Me It's been a real pain. Over the past five months, I've gotten a job at a medical research facility not too far away from home, but that's not the annoyance in my life. My biggest problem is that the hours I work give me minimal chances to spend some valuable time with my soon-to-be wife. It...

Inner Beauty My dearest Hisao, Where do I begin? Today is our 10th wedding anniversary, and my passion for you has not yet dwindled. Something about you has managed to keep me around, you know? I could have left you at various points in our relationship, but because of you being you and your willin...

Before reading, please take a look at this painting. It gives a good description of how to expect the girls to be dressed for the snow. This whole series was a joy to write, and I'm proud to call it my first ever complete writing series. http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/6145/hanakowinter.jpg =====...

Walk It's been just a few days since the accident now. I don't even remember what happened. All I remember is waking up in the hospital, both of my legs missing. I sobbed, but there were no tears to come with them. I was emotional, but the feelings were all so dull. Dad's gone. My legs are gone. Al...

Rin "teaches" Shizune how to paint. "You've got to become one with the brush. Imagine yourself being the brush and just act like you're rubbing yourself up against the canvas.." Rin trails off, closing her eyes. She really is bad at communicating with people, especially Shizune....

Before reading, please check out this wonderful piece of art that Drawbro drew and colored for me. It's a perfect representation of how to imagine all of this going down: http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/6606/hanakograduation.jpg ======================================================================...

The Counterattack Part Two: Preparation I don't know why I even decided to participate in this. I mean, I was originally forced into Kenji's room, just to have this whole plan involving his feminist conspiracy viciously crammed down my throat, but I could have just easily declined and went back to ...

The Counterattack Part One: The Plan A single light hanging over the low sitting table. A shade of yellow seeps out of the glass cage surrounding it, sending out waves of dim color across the table. The rest of the room is eerily dark and quiet, almost it was meant to be used for a police interroga...

My Pastebin : http://pastebin.com/u/YourFavAnon I write lots of stuff for all of you to read, criticism is welcome. Enjoy, and feel free to contact me with questions. Table of Contents : - The Counterattack: 1 / 2 / 3 - Yamaku's Class Commencement Speech - Inner Beauty - Take Me - Walk - Rin "...