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The O.H.L. wrote:Miki and Misha. Together you just get a fuckton of ENERGY!!!!!!!!

I'd say Shizune and Emi

Misha isn't interest in you at all

HarvestmanMan wrote:I'd love to wake up to Misha staring me in the face and going "WAHAHAHA~!"

But that's just me.

wake up

see this:



crap pants

http://radkliler.wakarimasenlol.com/wp- ... _smile.jpg

I wouldnt mind waking up to this for the rest of my life

During that scene I think Hisao's most likely last sentence is ...

I remember a thread about what the girls would be like without their disabilities and you can imagine everyone of them having the exact same personalities with the exception of Hanako

yeah I can see how just rehashing the convo from the other ending is lame

I'll try to change it

This part definitely reads better than the last two, but it's good that you're able to spot the issues yourself. As for the story, I thought it was nice how you got Hisao to get Hanako's attention again. Something subtle that wouldn't chase her off. However, the ending felt rushed - Hisao showing h...

oh, the tenses the tenses

sigh I'm never getting the hang of this

and it's way clunkier in flow and structure than I wanted, I seriously need to redo the last part - too many jumps in conclusion without any explanations ... grrr, I hate them, I might just erased it all and start all over

Le sigh.

I had the strangest dream that I can't for the life of me remember any details of, but it didn't matter as they were sent off to oblivion by the annoying buzz of my alarm clock. A new day. I Quickly and efficiently take the pills that keeps me alive, take a shower, brush my teeth, put on my uniform,...

Misha and Shizune - Radiohead's "Where I End and You Begin (The Sky is Falling In)"

Hanako - Johnny Cash's "Ring of Fire" or Red Hot Chili Pepper's "Scar Tissue"

Emi - The Pillows' "Runner's High"

Team Emi & Rin

... Remi


Team Remi

Ah yeah, sorry about those tenses things, I write on the fly and try to edit later

I tried to fix it as best I can, but impaired by ability So I apologize again for that and here's the next part, probably as terrible as the first What's the word when your mind is racing with what to say. There's so much of it all at once that you don't know where to begin. There's no beginning and...

I would like to apologize in advance for being a crappy writer, and as such, the above is so rough and raw I typed it as I went along in oh, 10 or so minutes, so it's definitely a work in progress any constructive criticism and pointers would be greatly appreciated to flesh out this (hopefully) firs...