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- Sat Nov 03, 2012 6:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
- Replies: 916
- Views: 727937
Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/2]
Yeah, Akira being a pool shark doesn't trigger problems with SoD here either. It kinda fits in a way.
- Sat Oct 27, 2012 8:53 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
- Replies: 916
- Views: 727937
Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/27]
I think you're right, though. Once you get past the Manly Picnic and have gone through the first few meetings with Akira I think you're safely enough in her route that you don't have to worry about flagging Lilly or Hanako. And, as you said, using the two for support might help -- if Hisao inquired ...
- Tue Oct 23, 2012 7:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
- Replies: 916
- Views: 727937
Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/23]
Glad to see you here, Thanatos. You don't know me from Adam, of course, but I've been a fan for awhile now. With that out of the way, I think you're off to a good start here. I'm not convinced Akira would spill her guts quite so easily, nor that Hisao would be all that vexed about his future (he'd p...
- Sun Oct 14, 2012 1:50 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Discussion - Emi Route (*Spoilers* Warning)
- Replies: 290
- Views: 142769
Re: Discussion - Emi Route (*Spoilers* Warning)
Yeah, I thought the ending worked quite well personally. The only real problem I had was that the big reveal was obvious from early on in the route, but as others have noted the reveal is less about a big twist and more about Emi's willingness to trust Hisao. With that in mind I thought it was one o...
- Thu Oct 11, 2012 11:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
- Replies: 449
- Views: 368022
Re: Rika Story - updated 5/15/2012 (mature content)
First, grats on finishing! I told you we'd wait for you, and so we have (well, those of use who count, anyway! :mrgreen: ). That said, I hope I'm reading the following bits wrong: She stifles a chuckle. “I’m mean to you, Hisao. It’s a trick question. The answer is that you don’t have to live with yo...
- Tue Oct 02, 2012 6:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 734340
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 10/1)
Their usual purpose is downtime. They let the audience catch their breaths before moving forward into the next arc.Mader Levap wrote:I thought their (usual) purpose was fanservice, not setup for another conflict?
- Sun Sep 30, 2012 4:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
- Replies: 202
- Views: 98141
Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
I've planned this scene for a long time. I always intended her to read the letter. Then I started actually writing the scene and found out that she didn't. Suits me fine. While it reduces the overt conflict, it exemplifies their deep conflict pretty well. It works better this way for two reasons: F...
- Fri Sep 21, 2012 7:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 734340
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 9/20)
Seeing as how Miki's sharing her bed and Suzu doesn't exactly want to advertise her exploits it seems a reasonable step to take.
- Sat Sep 08, 2012 6:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
- Replies: 202
- Views: 98141
Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Thanks. At times she's pretty hard to write, both emotionally and getting her right. But what delayed me this time was Kenji. I really don't like him much, nor the humour he represents. I still tried to do him justice, but don't expect him to be a major player. See, that means we'll get along fine,...
- Sat Sep 08, 2012 5:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
- Replies: 202
- Views: 98141
Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
I thought it was great. I'm really liking Miya; she's fucked up, she knows it, she copes as best she can. And everything else is so spot on that I find it easy to buy everything Dawnstorm's selling. The only tough part is the wait between chapters!
- Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 734340
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/16)
I don't think Miki screwed up there -- she was just getting lunch, which is hardly a sign of idiocy.
- Sat Aug 18, 2012 9:54 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 734340
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/16)
The only reason his build-up seems so sudden is because we're only seeing it in little glimpses; little bits that Suzu catches over the course of the story. He never comes out and says what he feels until he reaches that breaking point, so his transition may seem sudden to us, but it began the mome...
- Sat Aug 18, 2012 5:50 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 734340
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/16)
I suppose I'm lucky, in that all I have to do to read spoilered info on my phone is tap it. But that's just here; on another forum I can't read spoilered material at all without quoting the post in a reply, so I can see how it would get annoying. I get the common courtesy argument, but should that r...
- Thu Aug 16, 2012 7:03 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 734340
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/16)
But she sleepwalked up there... Right. The turning point here lies in the fact that she didn't get Hisao to back off and stop white knighting her, which means he wasn't around to keep her from sleepwalking her way to death. Had she been more assertive he'd probably have been sharing her bed by this...
- Thu Aug 16, 2012 3:07 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: I wish Misha had her own route *spoilers for Shizune's route
- Replies: 65
- Views: 33132
Re: I wish Misha had her own route *spoilers for Shizune's r
I didn't expect to see that much narrow-minded people. This from the guy claiming one's sexual orientation can be cured? :roll: As for the game in general, it's always been about five girls. Those girls got their routes, so game over. It might be nice to see routes from other POVs, or with other gi...