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Ha, I was just thinking today that you guy's haven't updated in a while. I'm looking forward to reading it.

It's always nice to read your stuff. Keep up the good work!

I haven't commented on this series before, but I have been following it since the beginning. Here's my personal opinion: I love it. As soon as I got over the odd formatting and kind of transfer of perspectives, I've enjoyed it immensely. I generally dislike OC fictions for KS; particularly because ...

I hope you guys never stop.

Well not really, I know you gotta stop eventually. But hopefully not for a while.

Always a pleasure to read your work.

Also, at the very end you wrote Lilly instead of Kano.

Act 2, Part 8 is up. It marks the beginning of a long, eventful day that'll span a few parts, and the return of some characters. Hanako: "Camo's never out of style when you're on the prowl.” She gave him a suggestive waggling of her eyebrows. You might want to fix who's saying what on this par...

What I think of your work.

Why doesn't Hisao use his helicopter pilot's license and go meet Suzu?

Big plothole, -3/10, would not read again.

"Aaaand backspace."

Ha!

One thing that bugs me is that I don't really think a school would have an xray machine, even Yamaku.

I hope you guys are getting more comments from other sites or something, because I find it a little odd that not a lot of people are commenting about your story on this forum.

Personally I like the story and think you guys are doing a great job so far. Keep up the good work.

Scissorlips wrote:“What? No.” I shake my head vigorously, sitting up. Hisao had moved over to give me enough room to lie down, putting my beg underneath my head as a makeshift pillow.

Spelled "bag" wrong. Worst story ever. 0/10. Would not recommend.

That outcome was overly blissfull, furthermore abrupt, so on and so forth.

I'll keep this short.

Keep going. I like it. A lot.

Awesome, I love it when something new comes out here.

Just a little request, could you separate your sentences, like your first part? When it's just a wall of text it's much harder to read.

I'm guessing like 7 or 8 years old, but I'm not really sure at all. No one seems to comment on your story update, which is weird. Keep up the good work man. It's cause everyone hates me *commits sudoku* Really? I could've sworn he was like 12-ish. Ah well. I think if he was 12 he definitely wouldn'...