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- Thu Jan 28, 2016 1:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Beginnings - Chapter 1. (Hisao+Emi Fanfic)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4477
Re: New Beginnings - Chapter 1. (Hisao+Emi Fanfic)
An Emi route going off Lilly's bad end? You do realize this is going to draw comparisons to Developments, do you? Well, if that doesn't faze you, I will certainly continue reading, since the first chapter was promising. Yes, Emi did overreact a bit, but... Well... It's Emi, and she's been known to ...
- Thu Jan 28, 2016 12:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Beginnings - Chapter 1. (Hisao+Emi Fanfic)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4477
Re: New Beginnings - Chapter 1. (Hisao+Emi Fanfic)
Ah ok, gotcha gotcha. Can't wait to see what happens next.
- Thu Jan 28, 2016 4:48 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: New Beginnings - Chapter 1. (Hisao+Emi Fanfic)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4477
Re: New Beginnings - Chapter 1. (Hisao+Emi Fanfic)
Feels like Emi's emotions came on a little too strong, but I bet there's a story behind it that happened during Lilly's route that we didn't see in the VN, hmm?
- Thu Jan 21, 2016 4:04 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Three Evils
- Replies: 12
- Views: 6852
Re: The Three Evils
So... This is just the prologue, right? Could go interesting places with a premise like this. I don't remember any stories that continue on from Shizune's Bad End. I believe there's a Misha Route that is Post Bad Ending. In the end, you either hook up with Misha or ruin yourself by trying to humili...
- Wed Jan 20, 2016 11:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24
- Replies: 376
- Views: 223874
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Looking Glass" 17/1/16
You're not at the level of Brythain, so you're ok.
- Wed Jan 20, 2016 2:29 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24
- Replies: 376
- Views: 223874
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Looking Glass" 17/1/16
What's the money that she'll fall in love with the boy she bumped into. She didn't have her breakfast in her mouth, I don't think it counts. First thought that came to my mind after reading that was Cerea mentioning that to Kurusu when she ran into him. And Sharp, if this is gonna be a sequel to th...
- Sun Jan 17, 2016 2:36 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24
- Replies: 376
- Views: 223874
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Looking Glass" 17/1/16
Class 3-1 as in "Third class of the first-years"? I know that's how they would format it in Japan, but the VN did it the other way.
- Wed Jan 13, 2016 11:35 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Isolation [Chapter 1]
- Replies: 17
- Views: 8472
Re: Isolation [Chapter 1]
It wasn't torture, it was a group of thugs targeting her father and burnt the house down with her in it to run from the cops.
- Tue Jan 12, 2016 12:34 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Isolation [Chapter 1]
- Replies: 17
- Views: 8472
Re: Isolation [Chapter 1]
I think we're tied at 3-all: Mirage, Swampie and Sharp-O have various degrees of 'dark'; HoneyBakedHam, Hesmiyu and I don't think so. I don't think it's the horrific kind of dark, although it might be the uneasy/disturbing psychological dark to some. My version of Miki's origin story had her hand d...
- Mon Jan 11, 2016 3:56 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Isolation [Chapter 1]
- Replies: 17
- Views: 8472
Re: Isolation [Chapter 1]
First comment on a story in so long! Well, here it goes: Everyone is saying it's too dark or sadistic for their taste, but, in a way, it's giving us a good dark representation of the scary shit that could run through Hanako's mind; the kind of stuff that would make someone freeze up (at the very lea...
- Sat Dec 19, 2015 8:10 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Innumerable Fits — Naomi Pseudo Route [11/25/17]
- Replies: 48
- Views: 34632
Re: Innumerable Fits — Naomi Pseudo Route [12/18/15]
There's a track meet during the festival? I am reading that correctly, right?
- Thu Dec 10, 2015 11:28 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
- Replies: 1198
- Views: 1065140
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Act 2 Complete 12
Was that a Kagami reference in the picture section of the story?
- Thu Dec 10, 2015 3:00 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Innumerable Fits — Naomi Pseudo Route [11/25/17]
- Replies: 48
- Views: 34632
Re: Innumerable Fits — Naomi Pseudo Route [12/8/15]
Naomi wears glasses? I thought it was Natsume that only wore glasses between the two.
- Sat Nov 21, 2015 12:14 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
- Replies: 227
- Views: 141233
Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 11/20)
I imagine the very slight differences between the two choices are gonna make an effect later, correct?
Otherwise, not sure what the point was.
Otherwise, not sure what the point was.
- Mon Oct 26, 2015 11:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 864
- Views: 423479
Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Leaty, if it helps any, I follow this story because the others have said: Your choice of words and new approach to a VN that is running out of fresh things to fanfic with. Whether Iwanako ends up with a guy or girl matters not, just as long as it's wonderfully written. I don't mean a very graphic, h...