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Looking back on this one, I am completely dissatisfied with it, but will keep it up as is. I wouldn't sell yourself short, but I sort of agree in that it doesn't seem quite up to par with some (i.e. most) of your other stories. Then again, you've been writing a TON of them. :P Well. Sometimes you g...

Him also likeing board games was probably laying it on a bit too thickly, but otherwise another great chapter! I was considering that myself, but then I thought about it and figured there are probably lots of family-less kids who would sooner wrap themselves up in books and games than interact with...

Pt 1 - Reconciliation Pt 2 - The Hotel Room Pt 3 - Bad Connection Pt 4 - Flight Pt 5 - Arrival Pt 6 - Reunion Pt 7 - Letting Go Pt 8 - Breakdown Pt 9 - Departure Epilogue - Checkmate By the time we get back to the house it’s already dark. None of us are particularly hungry. Lilly is still shaking, ...

Tezzeret wrote:God damn dude, this was pretty intense. Fucking loved it.

^ This.

Wow, that's awesome to hear. Thanks guys! :D Also, an update: the next part is well underway. Assuming I can power through my dinner I might just get it finished tonight. And an edit: Out of curiosity, is anyone interested in giving the next part a quick going-over? My usual proof-reader (i.e. my wi...

All I can say at this point is "I got things a-brewin'."

If nothing else, I'm glad this has sparked so much discussion.

I do have plans, of course, but I think I'll just have to accept the fact that no matter what I do there's going to be at least one person who isn't satisfied. 'Tis the way of things, I suppose.

themocaw wrote:Looking back on this one, I am completely dissatisfied with it, but will keep it up as is.

I wouldn't sell yourself short, but I sort of agree in that it doesn't seem quite up to par with some (i.e. most) of your other stories. Then again, you've been writing a TON of them.

You know, it's funny. I had initially thought about doing things a little differently but my ideas felt too over-the-top to me. I felt like if I went through with my original plans the whole thing would've turned into "MELODRAMA!!!!! No, really, MELODRAMA!!!!" :P Sorry to hear you aren't f...

I'm glad this one had a significant impact. I was a bit concerned that it might come off as too much or not enough.

Pt 1 - Reconciliation Pt 2 - The Hotel Room Pt 3 - Bad Connection Pt 4 - Flight Pt 5 - Arrival Pt 6 - Reunion Pt 7 - Letting Go Pt 8 - Breakdown Pt 9 - Departure Epilogue - Checkmate We spend almost the entire morning catching up. I fill Lilly in on my life after Yamaku. Signing up for writing cour...

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Robnonymous wrote:As for the feels... well... Let's just say the next part isn't happy...

Okay, well it shouldn't be happy. I'll have to leave the final verdict up to those who read it that aren't me.

I'm sorely tempted to post the new chapter-thing right now, but I must resist...

I worry about Sho. *sigh* I guess I just afraid that he'll be a token love interest. Currently the only thing that really binds him to Hanako is him being her "publicist", but the two need more interaction on a basis of common interests and doing things together in their free time. I just...

Yay! Followers! 8) So yeah, the next... I suppose I can just go ahead and call them chapters at this point because this story has gotten so damn long... anyway the next one is pretty much finished. And god damn was it tough to get out. Just need to have the wife (i.e. my own personal Hanako) give it...

If I were Naomi the one thing I'd be worried about here is the possibility that Hanako only feels this way because she's been nice to her. Look at the list of people who've treated Hanako decently in the past. Now look at the list of her love interests. Odd how the same people are on each list, eh?...