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by NelNinja
Tue Mar 05, 2019 3:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 46
Views: 35296

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/5/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

Okay, this chapter wraps up the threads from last time so I thought I'd post it today. It'll be a bit until Chapter 3 is up as I want more of a buffer before doing so. Enjoy! ----------------------------------- Chapter 2 Dr. Nirofuji looks troubled but not overly grim; hopefully that’s a good sign....
by NelNinja
Tue Mar 05, 2019 2:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 46
Views: 35296

Re: (WIP) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate (What happens if one misses fate?)

It's not shit and you shouldn't give up! To me, it's always fun to just see what people do, regardless of labeling it "good" or "bad." Thank you, though you do have the luxury of reading ahead :lol: Seriously though, I know you're right. The plot is coming together in my head, s...
by NelNinja
Tue Mar 05, 2019 12:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 46
Views: 35296

Re: (WIP) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate (What happens if one misses fate?)

Now I do have some points of criticism. In the beginning it sounds a lot like Hisao is the one that invited Iwanako to the forest even thought in the VN it’s clear that she is the one who invited him. I don’t know if this is a deliberate choice to help aid in charactization for the future but it re...
by NelNinja
Mon Mar 04, 2019 11:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 46
Views: 35296

(Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]

WARNING: Self-deprecation incoming I swear I'm fine, I chose this life and it's consequences. Just bear with me. Coolio, it's time to post the first chapter of a fic that I'm probably going to hate myself for committing to! First things first, I originally played Katawa Shoujo back in 2012, I think...
by NelNinja
Mon Mar 04, 2019 10:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band (Oneshot thread)
Replies: 60
Views: 51363

Re: Lighting Electric Candles (Rin)

I like you sgtpepper, I hope you stay here for a while.

Didn't quite get me to cry but it felt very similar to Going the Distance which did get me to cry, so applause. Stories don't usually hit me deep enough to get tears out of me, so getting me to feel like that is praise worthy from me. :)
by NelNinja
Mon Mar 04, 2019 9:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Masterplan (Finished)
Replies: 13
Views: 5324

Re: The Masterplan (Updated 03/03/19)

This is beautiful. I love that Kenji doesn't even bother to cover himself up in any meaningful way while stealthing into "enemy territory." Why would he? He's a master strategist and couldn't possibly make any mistakes. Also, Rin just casually going along with his plan broke me. Comedy gold.
by NelNinja
Mon Mar 04, 2019 9:38 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Shoujo for Rimworld
Replies: 11
Views: 10762

Re: Katawa Shoujo for Rimworld

Deadeye and Psycho... I guess they're really different in Rimworld cause otherwise I could never see it. Sad that the save didn't work after the new version. Rimworld is a game that I'd never be able to play, I've never really enjoyed that type of game, but I love hearing about the stories people ge...
by NelNinja
Tue Feb 26, 2019 10:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Sound of Silence, a Shizune one-shot ('All I Have'/'Enjoy the Silence' tie-in)
Replies: 8
Views: 4251

Re: The Sound of Silence, a Shizune one-shot ('All I Have'/'Enjoy the Silence' tie-in)

Now wait a minute. Misha got what she always wanted! Don't make it sound like the story has a bad ending after all! Don't hurt the drill princess! :O Perspective Fancopter, it can go either way. It's intentionally ambiguous and open. No drill princess need hurt today! Also, I thought it was a good ...
by NelNinja
Tue Feb 26, 2019 7:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Sound of Silence, a Shizune one-shot ('All I Have'/'Enjoy the Silence' tie-in)
Replies: 8
Views: 4251

Re: The Sound of Silence, a Shizune one-shot ('All I Have'/'Enjoy the Silence' tie-in)

Nice story, fits in well with its predecessors. It felt very much like Hisao to put off breaking up for as long as he could, instead of just doing it up front as soon as he saw Shizune. Well, we all have our moments of cowardice, and it''s not an easy task. All this praise is gonna go to my head so...
by NelNinja
Sat Feb 23, 2019 9:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Sound of Silence, a Shizune one-shot ('All I Have'/'Enjoy the Silence' tie-in)
Replies: 8
Views: 4251

Re: The Sound of Silence, a Shizune one-shot

This is peculiar. In a good way of course. First, thank you! My problem then, is that the person in which you choose Hisao to cheat on Shizune with is someone who, besides Lilly, would likely be the least likely to partake in such a thing. Maybe he's being truly awful and lying to both, I grant you...
by NelNinja
Sat Feb 23, 2019 5:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 729922

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

Done! I can officially say this is among the best of the fics I've read on the site, though I've only read about 20 on here so take that as you may. I'm quite happy that Emi ended up being the girl he ends up with since I felt that, with how the story was going, it would have been all the wrong reas...
by NelNinja
Sat Feb 23, 2019 5:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Sound of Silence, a Shizune one-shot ('All I Have'/'Enjoy the Silence' tie-in)
Replies: 8
Views: 4251

The Sound of Silence, a Shizune one-shot ('All I Have'/'Enjoy the Silence' tie-in)

I recently read ‘All I Have’ by Oddball and ‘Enjoy the Silence’ by bhtooefr and found myself really enjoying their premise, despite how dark or possibly “out of character” it may have been. This isn’t my first time writing something - short stories come to me occasionally - but this is the first Ka...
by NelNinja
Thu Feb 21, 2019 3:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1197
Views: 906421

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 2/21)

!!! HELL YEAH BABY! ... Ahem... I'll read this in a bit. Glad to see this update :D Edit: Oof, the question every high school couple faces: How do we stay together? And do we stay together? Can't say I have any experience in the matter, that started in college for me, but damn does it hit a chord KS...
by NelNinja
Tue Feb 19, 2019 6:01 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: 'Fastest Thing on No Legs'
Replies: 2
Views: 5675

'Fastest Thing on No Legs'

I drew this today while reading 'Developments' by dewelar after Rin's picture of Emi is described. It's a combination of her Act 3 picture and the close-up of Emi while she runs, when Emi is at her Emi-est. It's a little close to a redraw of the cover art of Act 3 for my tastes but it always felt we...
by NelNinja
Tue Feb 19, 2019 5:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 729922

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]

I smile earnestly at my companion. "In that case, I believe you've spotted our quarry, Miss Iwakuma." Developments Chapter 36, Hanako's last name is Ikezawa. I'm like 4 years late, but it greatly confused me. I'm loving this story, the developments (haha, nailed it) are bringing up a lot ...