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- Fri Nov 16, 2012 5:49 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 481463
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 11/15)
I think Rin's character is open for a pretty wide range of interpretations. I'm not sure even Aura "gets" her completely ;-) So while this interpretation may be an unusual one, I don't think it is that much off the mark. That said, the way she acts is pretty easy to remember, at least whe...
- Fri Nov 16, 2012 5:43 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Lilly's Route
- Replies: 518
- Views: 206655
Re: Lilly's Route
...I would like to reiterate...Heartless Wanderer wrote:EDIT: ...You know, we really should use spoiler tags for this stuff.
- Fri Nov 16, 2012 5:18 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Lilly's Route
- Replies: 518
- Views: 206655
Re: Lilly's Route
EDIT: ...You know, we really should use spoiler tags for this stuff. What about Lilly's parents? They won't stand still knowing this--she's still the daughter of the Satous afterall. It's rather blandly implied that they aren't happy, when Akira references them as being "out for her blood."...
- Fri Nov 16, 2012 4:54 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 481463
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 11/15)
A little out-of-character-ness on Rin's side of things. Not exactly something I blame you for since Rin's character is hard to "get" in the first place, so occasional bad notes are bound to happen. That said, bringing up the lunch with Emi that Hisao skipped out on was a good idea, and you...
- Fri Nov 16, 2012 4:49 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Lilly's Route
- Replies: 518
- Views: 206655
Re: Lilly's Route
EDIT: Spoiler tags added. Would appreciate similar tags being added into quotes of these posts, please. I'm afraid I got caught up in the heat of making a point and forgot to account for people who haven't finished the path yet. It does sound like indoctrination theory, doesn't it? I'm not saying th...
- Fri Nov 16, 2012 4:23 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Is there such a thing?
- Replies: 64
- Views: 20112
Re: Is there such a thing?
Well, I was married at the age of twenty two, and thought I was absolutely in love. The woman was dedicated, even though my work in the military had put a strain on our relationship. We never had kids, though we wanted to. One day she had come to me and had apparently got sick of it all. She gave m...
- Fri Nov 16, 2012 2:50 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Lilly's Route
- Replies: 518
- Views: 206655
Re: Lilly's Route
Isn't the epilogue an indication that Hisao actually bite the dust at the airport scene with all that surreal image of a 'perfect happy ending'? That sounds like Indoctrination Theory, dude. >_> Also, I wouldn't call it a perfect happy ending, per se. Hisao still has a heart attack, and like the ot...
- Fri Nov 16, 2012 1:45 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
- Replies: 2254
- Views: 586624
Re: What's so bad About the Feels?
Most fanfiction at that level of fail is intentionally bad. It's a form of trolling, really. The "real" bad fanfiction is usually neither funny nor remarkable.Boppin wrote:I know not all fan fiction is as absurdly written as Full-Life Consequences,
- Thu Nov 15, 2012 4:11 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
- Replies: 2254
- Views: 586624
Re: What's so bad About the Feels?
To that end, fan fiction has always been uninteresting to me. Unless a story is canon, I don't feel as though it is worth telling; it's forged. All fiction is forged. And so is a good chunk of "non-fiction," but that's another discussion entirely. The point is, it's fiction. The fact that...
- Thu Nov 15, 2012 3:34 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Telling friends and/or family?
- Replies: 200
- Views: 71487
Re: Telling friends and/or family?
Huh. Well, it looks like the first guess was right after all.
- Thu Nov 15, 2012 2:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Walking Forwards (tentative title)
- Replies: 29
- Views: 13837
Re: Walking Forwards (tentative title)
Right, which is why trying to imagine her approaching a complete stranger and getting their attention by grabbing that stranger's arm makes my brain hurt. The idea that Hanako might want to do so is beside the point; it would take her a very long time to work herself up to attempting it and even the...
- Thu Nov 15, 2012 1:43 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Telling friends and/or family?
- Replies: 200
- Views: 71487
- Thu Nov 15, 2012 1:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Nonchalance (11/15 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scenes)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 8834
Re: Nonchalance (11/14 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scene)
Like Catgirl said, there's not much to say on the story yet. I'm not even sure if your OC is supposed to be likeable or not - at the moment I'm tending to "not" He's not supposed to be likeable, no. He may have his occasionally amusing moments for people who like black humor but he's a ra...
- Thu Nov 15, 2012 3:59 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Shower Scenes
- Replies: 207
- Views: 135453
Re: Shower Scenes
I initially passed this over because I mistook the title as meaning it was a smutfic, then I found myself possessed by a morbid curiosity of how a shower-scene smutfic would even work in text form anyway, so I took a peek and found a hilarious humor fic instead of a shitty smut fic. So needless to s...
- Thu Nov 15, 2012 2:56 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Nonchalance (11/15 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scenes)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 8834
Re: Nonchalance (11/14 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scene)
though I didn't understand the hamsters and their kittens thing. Ryota has weird inner monologues. In this case he's implying that hamsters have had babies with cats as a deadpan twist on the old "everyone and their great aunt Sally" type expression. Consider this your only point-blank wa...