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I love the way you are writing this. It's not often that I actually like a story from a girls perspective.

At first I thought; sure why not, I didn't give Cutter a chance so let's have a go here. I'm damn glad I did. I think I'll go back and actually read Cutter past the first scene, I'm not as much of a whimp as I was a couple months ago. Storywise, this was an intriguing story. The way everybody is tal...

Never title your story "untitled" or "title to come later" or anything to that affect. All it does is send the reader the message that you either don't know or don't care enough about your own story to give it a name. If the writer doesn't care, why should the reader? You're pus...

kuniqs wrote:Would Rika be more fit to worship Nurgle or Tzeench?

Oh no, let's try to keep this as far away from 40k as possible.

Hm, that was a nice read. I'm too tired to comment on it properly (it's 3am here), but I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when she wins the game of battleship, or if she will just procrastinate so she doesn't have to deal with any new situations.

It appears that Rika won't change. Coolio then.

Edit: Thanks for not going asshat Hisao on this branch or the other.

I have a big stupid grin on my face thanks to you. That was great.

That was glorious. Magnificent. Awesome. Just damn hilarious. I have a huge grin on my face. Funniest part for me was probably where Misha (I think) said "It's not polite to point". I had to stop reading for a short moment while I read that. I think there are just a few places where you fo...

Bad experiences produce nothing but knowledge of how to avoid more of them. We all have bad days, but I can say I haven't experienced anything as jarring as that. I hope you can deal with everything, I hope you learn from everything, I hope you keep up with the writing which I'm assuming is therapeu...

You sure you want your steam name open to everyone?

Very enjoyable read.

By the way you have the same simile twice fairly quickly. It's the one about brushing your teeth and drinking orange juice. It doesn't detract from the story, it just reads weirdly in my opinion.

Yay, I need something to counter the boring-ness of To Kill a Mockingbird. God I hate English classes. How far into the book are you? I wouldn't call To Kill a Mockingbird boring, but that's just my opinion. I thought it was a pretty good book, but then again English classes tend to make you sick o...

Yay, I need something to counter the boring-ness of To Kill a Mockingbird. God I hate English classes.

I don't think the VN ever specifies how long Miki has been going to Yamaku. So far, neither does this fanfic. It says that Miki will be attending her first year at Yamaku, which implies, key word here is implies, that she has lost her hand. And what Roamin said was true. Also I think she states she...

Please with the story paths, don't take them to the extreme like the game does. It would ruin the story for me.
Please just don't make him go uber aggressively towards the other character.