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Although if someone is going to request something I think that was the best way to do it, John Cleese makes everything better

(Warning, I wrote this when too tired to be completely coherent. Contents may be subpar.) I adore your Snoozu. I really, really do. And you're very clearly a talented writer. But when it comes to moving the plot along, there -is- such thing as too much fluffing. Let me explain. I like the previous ...

That's what I thought too

"Yeah I know it's a little unorthodox, but there's actually a reason for this and you'll see why in Act 2"

You're just trying to tease us now

Great chapters as usual although I am not too fond of the choices but I can sort of see why you did it if you plan to do bad and neutral endings as well

I am enjoying your story so far and I look forward to the next chapter although I do agree with Oddball it does seem like your character can do no wrong

Maybe this could be some form of sequel to classroom games. Just before Hisao asks Misha to dinner he remembers what Miki said and asks her instead Boom

Congratulations Doomish no one deserves it more than you (although I'm still not sure what it's about).

BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:I'm not sure we'll be seeing a whole lot of Doomish in the near future, seeing he's joined Salty Tears as a path writer. But hey, who knows.

Who is this Salty Tears you speak of?

Just as good reading through it the second time round, I'm liking the direction that you are taking this too looking forward to whenever the next instalment is.

This is definitely one of my favourites on here I have read it three times, looking forward to the next chapter

This is my favourite fic so far I love the way that you have made Suzu an awesome character and have even given her an epic background too

I praise you sir

I'm really looking forward to how you continue this

/)^3^(\ excited for more

When you say that you are going to write a neutral and bad ending do you mean alongside a good ending or just a neutral and bad ending with no good ending Haha, I'd be a right proper dick if I did that, wouldn't I? No, I meant that I would write those in addition to the good ending. *sigh of relief...