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I remember getting reamed in English class if I ever used the phrase "someone else and me ," always being told that the proper phrasing was "someone else and I " Actually it depends on the context. If "someone else and me" is not the subject but the object of a sentenc...

I'll go back and make some quick edits now with some more thorough ones after I get home tomorrow night. I remember getting reamed in English class if I ever used the phrase "someone else and me ," always being told that the proper phrasing was "someone else and I " I honestly ha...

When we leave the art room I no longer hear any arguments coming from my classroom, so we turn towards the center of the building. This time however, Saki heads in the direction of the elevator instead of the stairs. She notices the look of puzzlement on my face. “Remember when I told you that if th...

EDIT: Split into two posts to make it more manageable and more in line with the flow of the forums. Was able to recover it from the hard drive and do some editing to it :) Longer than the first chapter, hope you like it. This takes place in the middle of Cold War. I posted a rough draft of this for ...

That's some terrible luck, don't you think? I will remain patient. I'm used to having horrible luck. I'll price out a new motherboard tomorrow vs the cost of a SATA enclosure as there are some rather time-sensitive things on that drive :( Newegg is pretty fast with their returns, but I can't wait a...

Bad news. Second chapter is done (and quite long) but while playing a game last night to kill some time between finishing it and editing it, my comp froze. Long story short, the motherboard in the new computer I just built two weeks ago is bad. I've already sent it off to newegg for a replacement, b...

I meant to say this when you first posted the opening chapter, but I feel like I can already get an intuitive sense of Saki's character just from that little bit. I will be awaiting the next chapter. In that aspect, once again, the Dramatica software has been incredible. It asks and helps define as...

the only question i would have for you is--what drives your character of saki? this is something you should really have in mind, and if you've really planned it out for months, it should be as concrete as a cinder-block. for now, i think you're doing just fine. just be careful to keep a character l...

Thanks for the encouragement :) I'm writing some other scenes right now, but the next linear one after this should be finished in a few days. I'm getting crushed at work right now and have little time for writing, but it will get very slow after Christmas. I've already had more than one person ask m...

Eurobeatjester , I'm very pleased with what you've done thus far. It's nice to see a first installment that's actually more than 500 words, and you've clearly put a lot of thought, research and effort into your work. Somebody has tried doing a Saki psuedo-route before, and that route is "techn...

Well, I guess the first order of business is to welcome you to this little corner of the internet. On to the story. As I'm sure you've seen (or will see) discussed here, a pseudo-route is a long and difficult undertaking that requires planning, perseverance, and hard work. Your first chapter is a s...

Act 1: Life Expectancy Scene 1: Detour This takes place in Act 1 immediately after the scene It Builds Character , where Hisao has a conversation with Mutou about learning to deal with the disabilities of the other students. Misha barges in and asks for help finding plywood and other supplies, and ...

Hey everyone! First time poster here, maybe starting out a tad too ambitious, but hopefully it will go well for all, eh? :lol: I'd like to introduce myself, and a little bit about what KS means to me and why I'm writing this. I had just moved to a new city in summer of last year, a first for me. I h...