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Chapter 4 has arrived! Before that, though, a quick note. For any dialogue of Hisao's that is both signed and spoken, I will be using "[ ]" to indicate this. I'll add this note to the Table of Contents post eventually likely as well. Enjoy! --------------------- The days have passed quickl...

azumeow wrote:Wait....an 18-chapter one-shot?

Wat. Not that I'm displeased, far from it, this is good shit, but....wat.

18+ = adult content. Not 18+ chapters.

WALL OF TEXT, ROUND THREE, FIGHT! Bullet points this time. - Most Importantly - I'm not saying that Lilly ISN'T prideful. She fairly clearly is. I'm simply arguing that pride isn't the reason she keeps people shut out in the ways that she does in the game. "Not wanting to burden people with you...

Back after a day out, so I'll tap three mana, Dragonskull Summit for black, and play my Wall of Text. (Random sidenote - I don't know if anyone's heard of Weiss Schwarz, but I'm slowly using Magic Set Editor to make a Katawa Shoujo set for that TCG - where in Fan Works would be a good place to post ...

Fair play. I'll rework that line once I sit down to edit. Risk-playing Shizune IS best Shizune. Before the events of Act 3 would make the premise...awkward, I had a fic idea in mind in which Shizune and Misha actually DID tie down Hisao and "torture" him until he agreed to join the student...

Well, it's...it's... Brilliant, absolutely. Your writting has such gravitas to it, I can't really explain. But it's truly artistic. Also, your ideas are brilliant. I'm somewhat glad you didn't divluge into "smut" instantly , but also don't doubt that you'd make that just as beautiful. I t...

Lilly's problem is, I think, more akin to the others than you're giving it credit for. I would characterize her problem as having no one to confide her problems in - more accurately, she believes she doesn't. This actually dovetails with what you said - her best friend is Hanako, who obviously has d...

Sooooo, it's me again! This is considerably different from the Benefit of Hindsight, which I'm also working on here. Nothing's up my sleeve with this one. It's a Shizune x Hisao one-shot fic. It takes place in a nebulous time after Hisao and Shizune have graduated from Yamaku and are presumably in u...

Hi! I read the two Shizune/Hanako oriented pieces, and will go back with commentary on the middle piece once I've read it. I'm not a fan of Hanako. At all, for a lot of reasons, but I enjoyed this. The first piece did a good job of establishing their similarities within your universe, and while I qu...

Edits made! Thanks Mirage! And yes, this story won't be featuring Emi, Hanako, or Rin. Lilly and Shizune will be the only two of the main five girls showing up. As for the rest of the cast, we have Kenji and Mutou so far. There's two more members of the cast who will make appearances in the story (e...

Oh, you tease! Why would you do thaaaat. I guessed that making Shizune the mentor would be far too obvious, but I didn't see that coming. (Neither did Lilly! Ha! ) But I'm dying to know what happened with Shizune, and you know it, and I know you know, and aaaaagh. Your writing is really good, I'd t...

It is 8:45 AM as I walk through the front gate of Yamaku. At least this time I don't hesitate. For better or worse, most of my nervousness is minimal today. Perhaps I should be thankful I came here yesterday. Now, it's part of my routine, and the routine is less likely to be terrifying than the new....

I occasionally worry that Kenji will, one day, finally kill someone in self defense after they sarcastically claim to be assassins. Like, there has to come a time when his craziness has terrifyingly real consequences. A lot of what makes Kenji work so well (IMO) is that really he's a bunch of sound...

As much as I'd love Shizune first, in an effort not to be biased, I'd go with the order of the character's scenes in the library (which I've just realized IS alphabetical order, I fail at creativity), so Emi --> Side Character #1 --> Hanako ---> Side Character #2 ---> Lilly ---> Side Character #3 --...

I think there *is* something to the initial premise of this thread (ie, Shizune being disliked more because of Misha's existence as a character making it easy to compare the two to one another). Misha's lack of a route, ironically, is part of what I think makes her as beloved as she is - you get all...