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Another nice one Scroff! Before I go crazy with the quotes, one thing that didn't sit well with me is that this felt like two disjointed stories; one with Miki & Hisao and one with the whole Ikuno drama. In fact, if you removed all of the latter, it feels like the former wouldn't lose anything....

Scroff wrote: ↑Thu Aug 02, 2018 2:50 pmyou've had your hands all over me for weeks, we might as well make it official."

This was great. I love your take on Miki and the relationship she and Hisao have also that line made me crack up.

Craftyatom wrote: ↑Sat Jul 28, 2018 12:16 pm

PKMNthiefChris wrote: ↑Fri Jul 20, 2018 11:54 pm

Craftyatom wrote: ↑Fri Jul 20, 2018 10:47 pmHe swallows, than inhales deeply.

Should be then

Fixed! Thanks for finding that, can't believe I let it slip through.

No problem, honestly one letter mistakes in homonyms aren't hard to miss because as you read over it, it sounds the same and looks mostly the same.

While I am sure this is a dead fic at this point I just want to say it was a wonderful piece for what is here and the scene where Seiki confesses lying and explains her amnesia was particularly good.

Discovered this fic today and OH MY GOSH AOI IS SO CUTE I MUST PROTECT HER . Is this story dead or what? Please tell me it's not dead :( Well given that it hasn’t updated in 2 1/2 years, if it isn’t dead then it’s in a very deep sleep. One of the two considering both dudes are still working on the ...

Craftyatom wrote: ↑Fri Jul 20, 2018 10:47 pm
He swallows, than inhales deeply.

Previous: Layover

Should be then

Craftyatom wrote: ↑Fri Jul 20, 2018 10:47 pm Diabetes inducing sweetness

Someone get me something bitter, that isn't coffee. I need to counter act the sweetness!

Now I just have this as how Hisao gets on Miki's route Insist I don't think it'll be on a test >Explain String Theory to Miki I heard that she only wants him for his brain :shock: Nah she has a thing for nerdy boys that change her perception of reality with things other than their dick, she just ha...

Now I just have this as how Hisao gets on Miki's route

Insist I don't think it'll be on a test
>Explain String Theory to Miki

Riakai wrote: ↑Wed Jan 13, 2016 8:50 pm “We’ll still be together forever. Promise?”

“I… promise.” Those words stuttered out, hard to leave, but perfect across the tongue.

Why do I have a bad feeling about the results of that promise in Innumerable Fits...

This was... Really, really good. I'm wishing I had more to read of it now, even as I turn what I read over and over in my head... Excellent work

Well uh... This hasn't been updated in over 2 years so I just want to say that what's been here so far was excellent. I dunno if this will ever get a revival but... Thank you for sharing this piece with us. Hisao has gotten himself into a massive hole but against my judgement I'll have faith in the ...

Dad, we need to talk. One of the sentences that no father ever wants to here. Especially in the cases when their child has medical issues. We know that Hisao is just going to try to sell his dad on the idea of Saki staying with them but I'm sure that his dad nearly had a heart attack after that. Go...

So I just want to throw in that I think this is great. Like really great. The prompt works and the ending was completely satisfying... This was great.

I... found myself weirdly relating to Miya as I read this. If Miya's Hanako's darkside, then I guess I felt like I'd be Miya if I used her acting to stay invisible and/or please everyone. Keeping everyone away before they can reject you... This spoke to me in ways that are actually pretty hard to ex...