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Was worth the wait. I felt like it was dying down in after the major climax, but this last chapter felt nothing short of perfect. Congrats, I wish I had your finesse to actually write something this long. Maybe sometime in the near future I can tackle my own novel ideas. Crazy to think I was bumping...

mite b cool

Glad you took my one suggestion about making Shizune come off a bit less of a bitch in the one bit. Definitely seemed a lot more on point with her character. And, as a wise man once said:

A good boob day is just a good day.

Yeah girlllllls!

This chapter, at least in my opinion, was probably the best one yet. Bravo. Honestly, hugs are weird and foreign things to me. I don't know the correct protocol when it comes to hugs. How comfortable do you have to be with someone to warrant a hug as a departure? How long should you hug someone for?...

All time favorite KS piece. Fantastic work.

Tokoz wrote:I am trying so, so hard not to laugh. I'm failing, I don't know why. Just the whole seriousness of a post feminist war...

Yeah, that was the goal with that one. Make some people feel bad, make other people laugh. Was certainly an interesting thing to write.

Mirage_GSM wrote:

...and we lie there, embracing one another, for the rest of the night.

Awww... Poor Sumi - her dinner is going to waste...

Hisao will just have to inform her that he already got the din dins.

The lyrics from this song seem quite suiting to this chapter.



The song is actually about alcoholism, but it could be taken various ways.

Considering I've read all of the shit in your pastebin, it literally came as a surprise that this did not turn into sex. I would have certainly approved of either way though, of course.

This was the best chapter in a good while. Was less of the same and more of something different, which is certainly a relief. Hopefully things continue like this, because this is definitely what I've missed from Act 2 and all.

I agree that Emi suggestion is good, but my enthusiasm for it is diminished by the supernatural elements—which the author argues are not supernatural—it has. Since he plans on writing similar stories for the rest of the girls, I am reserving final judgement on those. Shizune, no question, Weekend A...

Actually; here's a good question. Does anyone have an (obviously subjective) list of the best epilogues people have written? I've only read two I would count worthy, but I've barely read any. I'd love to read more good ones. Hanako: Sisterhood ( http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6750 ) Ri...

This isn't just good - and believe me, I'm not over-exaggerating when I say this: this is the best story to come out of this community so far. It directs you through a bunch of words with ease, but not only that, it makes you think on a whole other level to sort of grasp and comprehend the true mean...

Tornado Warning My eyes sting. It's almost like someone's just been standing in front of me, tossing dirt and sand into them. I can't tell if it's the rain drops free-falling out of the clouds or tears of my own trickling down my cheeks, but either one seems appropriate. My wife stands with her arm...