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by dewelar
Wed Jul 08, 2015 10:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 735078

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.59 posted 6/1

*sighs loudly* I suppose it's time for that one errant comment I leave every now and then around these parts. Promise it won't take too long. No worries. The fact that your comments often skew in a different direction is what makes them some of the most interesting, so thanks again for that :). As ...
by dewelar
Sun Jul 05, 2015 7:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms (Updated 07/24/15)
Replies: 47
Views: 22813

Re: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms (Updated 07/02/15)

A minor point, but they use a different notation for batteries in Japan.
by dewelar
Sat Jun 27, 2015 11:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 874322

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Iwanako Rising)

*nods* I was going to mention Rin, but I figured that was pretty much entirely explicable due to Hisao's inability to understand her. Putting myself in Rin!Hisao-space, I can easily see myself being fed up with what I perceive as Rin's inscrutable nature and throwing in the towel. I just can't bring...
by dewelar
Sat Jun 27, 2015 9:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 874322

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Iwanako Rising)

I think it depends on how strictly or loosely you define "canon." *cringes* Here we go... Actually, I agree with most of your post, with one exception: 2. General well-meaningness. Hisao's not a jerk. Even in his bad endings, he's never really a jerk - he just tends to misunderstand and m...
by dewelar
Fri Jun 26, 2015 9:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 874322

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Iwanako Rising)

Whoever Hisao is at the beginning of canon is different from who he is at the end, whether the difference is growth or... something else. Whatever his previous life (and we do have some clues, as SirKaid says), his interactions at Yamaku reflect the new reality of his heart. Hisao is scarcely a sta...
by dewelar
Wed Jun 24, 2015 8:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 874322

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Iwanako Rising)

And really, who even wants to write an Iwanako fic now? I sure as hell don't. That's like trying to write a contemporary fantasy piece on the same board as JK Rowling: you might be great, but comparisons will be drawn, and you will fail. *shyly raises hand* Actually, it's because of Leaty that I ha...
by dewelar
Wed Jun 24, 2015 5:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 874322

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Iwanako Rising)

I think what's interesting about Iwanako (and therefore Iwanako Month) is that at this point she's functionally Leaty's OC. I mean, I like Shizune, but I think Puncyclopedia likely has at least as good a handle on her as I do, probably better. There's Weekend at Hisao's or Megumeru's works. She's h...
by dewelar
Wed Jun 24, 2015 12:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 735078

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.59 posted 6/1

PLease consider posting it in two parts... I assume you mean I should space the parts out (i.e., post half one day and the other half, say, a week later). Actually, any other chapter I might have been willing to oblige, but there are reasons this chapter needs to be released as a unit. Sorry :(. I ...
by dewelar
Tue Jun 23, 2015 11:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 735078

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.59 posted 6/1

Bit late but yay another chapter of Developments, I'll trade your late comment for my late reply :). been waiting for it for a while and I can say that I'm happy for Emi & Hisao and for Meiko to finally get together with the Nurse. T'was a good read. Definitly looking forward to the Iwanako and...
by dewelar
Tue Jun 23, 2015 11:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 874322

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Iwanako Rising)

Similarly, other big fic writers such as dewelar have also included her as part of their larger tapestries. That's okay, since nobody seems to want to review my work anyway. Guess they're all a'skeered http://i.imgur.com/kOTWV0i.png :wink:. Heh, I think that they're all tuckered out from contributi...
by dewelar
Tue Jun 23, 2015 10:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 874322

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Iwanako Rising)

brythain wrote:Similarly, other big fic writers such as dewelar have also included her as part of their larger tapestries.
That's okay, since nobody seems to want to review my work anyway. Guess they're all a'skeered Image :wink:.
by dewelar
Sat Jun 20, 2015 8:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms (Updated 07/24/15)
Replies: 47
Views: 22813

Re: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms

Yeah, I have to agree with Mirage -- this Hisao feels like he stepped out of a bad romance novel. If this is how you want him to come off, you need to tell us how he got this way, and quick . Also, I would consider leaving your voting open longer than a couple of days. I know a number of folks who o...
by dewelar
Thu Jun 18, 2015 11:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re-imagining Fanfic: Fideism
Replies: 4
Views: 2739

Re: Re-imagining Fanfic: Fideism

I have the same problem as Blank Mage, especially when there's dialogue serving as some of the bricks. Also:
swaggerjohns wrote:I'll continue it based on if it gets any interest.
Not a good idea to break forum rules with your first post.
by dewelar
Thu Jun 18, 2015 10:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Phantom Pains: Mirror Shoujo
Replies: 85
Views: 33601

Re: Phantom Pains (Alternate Reality) [Updated 18/6/15]

Thanks to dewelar for allowing me to steal use his running poem! You're quite welcome. I hadn't read this story until tonight, and now that I have I can say that the way in which it was used is quite fitting :). Looking forward to seeing where Mirror Shoujo goes from here! Prediction: Kenji, who is...
by dewelar
Thu Jun 18, 2015 3:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms (Updated 07/24/15)
Replies: 47
Views: 22813

Re: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms

swampie2 wrote:I like the idea of rotating writers, though I think choose your own adventure fics are against the rules :c
They are.