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by cosmicmustache
Wed Oct 16, 2013 9:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Re: Rin: Osmosis

I also really want to see a cute drawing of LIlly holding lots of tiny hearts in her arms, I really love that idea. For what it's worth, one may as well make a gory version, too. That would be cool! I like to draw/sketch, but am in no way, shape, or form an artist. If you ever see one (or draw one ...
by cosmicmustache
Wed Oct 16, 2013 6:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Re: Rin: Osmosis

I hope you don't take my post to mean that your story was bad. As you noted it was not really my type of story, and I'd have done a few things differently, but apart from the technical basics (which you did okay) there's no right or wrong in art. When I was younger I would have taken immediate offe...
by cosmicmustache
Wed Oct 16, 2013 1:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Re: Rin: Osmosis

When I started reading, I wanted to ask you why the heck you would start a story with a dream sequence. Dream sequences can be used to give a bit more insights into a character's subconscious, but at the start of a story you have no idea about that character's current situation, no way to interpret...
by cosmicmustache
Wed Oct 16, 2013 1:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Re: Rin: Osmosis

Heh...I happened to be on the board as you were posting this, and hovered here reading each post as it appeared. I enjoyed this trip thoroughly :D . And yes...some people don't need to talk in order to talk, indeed...*sigh^ Glad you enjoyed it. This was only my second fanfic (first is 'Rin: Hisao's...
by cosmicmustache
Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Re: Rin: Osmosis

Rin: Osmosis By cosmicmustache [Based on the Four Leaf Studios’ visual novel “Katawa Shoujo”] (Chapter XI) Hisao awoke to darkness and muffled noise. He instinctively reached up toward his eyes only to encounter a soft, heavy cloth. Grabbing and pulling at the fabric, the darkness slid away to reve...
by cosmicmustache
Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Re: Rin: Osmosis

Rin: Osmosis By cosmicmustache [Based on the Four Leaf Studios’ visual novel “Katawa Shoujo”] (Chapter X) Hisao’s concerns about catching up with Rin appeared to be unfounded. He only had to take a few steps before he found himself standing beside her confronted by a disturbing realization. They ha...
by cosmicmustache
Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Re: Rin: Osmosis

Rin: Osmosis By cosmicmustache [Based on the Four Leaf Studios’ visual novel “Katawa Shoujo”] (Chapter IX) The murmur-quiet air of the hall was suddenly breached by a loud, static-encrusted voice. “Ladies and Gentlemen, we will be closing very soon, so please get your stuff and get ready to get out...
by cosmicmustache
Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Re: Rin: Osmosis

Rin: Osmosis By cosmicmustache [Based on the Four Leaf Studios’ visual novel “Katawa Shoujo”] (Chapter VIII) He caught up with her in front of a painting that didn’t hurt his head. A quick scan of the label let him know that they were looking at ‘The Gleaners’ painted by Jean-François Millet in 185...
by cosmicmustache
Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Re: Rin: Osmosis

Rin: Osmosis By cosmicmustache [Based on the Four Leaf Studios’ visual novel “Katawa Shoujo”] (Chapter VII) As Hisao turned his head, a flash of yellow caught his eye. Focusing, he saw a tall, blond girl at one of the nearby alcoves. She was dressed in a Yamaku school uniform, but the uniform seeme...
by cosmicmustache
Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Re: Rin: Osmosis

Rin: Osmosis By cosmicmustache [Based on the Four Leaf Studios’ visual novel “Katawa Shoujo”] (Chapter VI) Hisao caught up with Rin as she stood, relaxed and calm before one of the larger sculptures along the middle of the hall. For a moment it seemed odd to him that, in the pace of a few yards, Ri...
by cosmicmustache
Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

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Rin: Osmosis By cosmicmustache [Based on the Four Leaf Studios’ visual novel “Katawa Shoujo”] (Chapter V) Stopping in front of an odd, colorful work on the wall in this alcove, Hisao glanced at the label, then called out to Rin, “Hey, it’s a Picasso!” As Hisao looked at the vibrant, if oddly disjoi...
by cosmicmustache
Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

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Rin: Osmosis By cosmicmustache [Based on the Four Leaf Studios’ visual novel “Katawa Shoujo”] (Chapter IV) They came to a slow stop inside the next alcove to examine its occupant. This painting would probably have been a lovely, colorful picture of a street or bridge under a sunset captured in broa...
by cosmicmustache
Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Re: Rin: Osmosis

Rin: Osmosis By cosmicmustache [Based on the Four Leaf Studios’ visual novel “Katawa Shoujo”] (Chapter III) He came to a stop next to Rin in the little alcove as she stood silent and still before the painting that resided there. It was an odd painting that Hisao didn’t recognize. A huge, misshapen,...
by cosmicmustache
Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Re: Rin: Osmosis

Rin: Osmosis By cosmicmustache [Based on the Four Leaf Studios’ visual novel “Katawa Shoujo”] (Chapter II) Before Hisao could go five paces, a voice called out to him. “Program, sir?” The sight that met Hisao as he turned toward this new voice caused him a discernible start that was amplified by th...
by cosmicmustache
Tue Oct 15, 2013 6:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Osmosis
Replies: 29
Views: 13385

Rin: Osmosis

Rin: Osmosis By cosmicmustache [Based on the Four Leaf Studios’ visual novel “Katawa Shoujo”] (Chapter I) Hisao came to the realization that he was standing in a large hall. It was wide and tall in a way that would be instantly familiar to anyone who’d visited any large, older museum. It was a hall ...