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- Mon Jun 04, 2018 6:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 483874
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Happy Birthday, Misha!)
Been reading this and I enjoy it quite a bit. Wanted to say that and also: Once again we find ourselves at the split between the dorms. Misha's hands are full with Rin's painting, so just just smiles at me. “Good night, Hicchan~! I'll see you in the morning!” Caught this typo near the end of Act 2 S...
- Sat Jun 02, 2018 1:36 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 891000
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180528 'The Ties That Bind')
So you guys read a fan fic every week or some such? You mind if I uhhhhhhh
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- Fri Jun 01, 2018 2:12 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
- Replies: 143
- Views: 99137
Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)
Made some minor edits to the first part and wrote another. Hmm... This wouldn't really work without a major falling out between Misha and Shizune in the time of the VN, but it does kinda work as an alternate timeline here. Not really much to say about the story yet - if you decide to continue it - b...
- Tue May 29, 2018 2:23 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Trying Something New [Emi Fic]
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6105
Re: Trying Something New [Emi Fic]
I think your writing was pretty good, not great but good enough, I enjoyed it. I will say a few things: 1. It seems like you write one sentence at a time then go on to the next, with each sentence being its own paragraph? And often the sentences have more clauses and conjunctions than they need, lik...
- Fri May 25, 2018 8:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
- Replies: 143
- Views: 99137
Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)
Chapter 1: Meeting Misha sat by the open window, enjoying the cool breeze. A lock of long brown hair twirled idly around one finger while her other hand tapped out a rhythm on the windowsill. The constant signing she performed throughout each day made it feel weird to ever leave her hands idle, eve...
- Fri May 25, 2018 8:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
- Replies: 143
- Views: 99137
An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
A fan fiction inspired by a goofy smut fic that I memed on the discord. There's no smut in here (yet), since if I do this, I would make it as a real "route" for the titular pairing instead of just a horny one-shot. This is what I would consider the prologue or first chapter which only hint...
- Fri May 25, 2018 8:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5283
Re: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
I open my mouth to speak, and nothing but a rough croak makes its way out before I fall into a coughing fit, doubling up as much as is possible with all of the things they have wired to me, and the stiff casting on my lower body I only now notice. I think this sentence is a bit run on and could be ...