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On a semi-related note, the picture of Aiko in your signature looks fantastic but the one at the bottom of the contents post looks like she's having a mental breakdown after murdering someone with an axe. That and the high-neck vest and the extra neck length after that makes her look really weird. ...

Not much I can say, other than nice chapter. For some reason, I'm very interested as to what's happening with this Makoto fella and Miki. Dunno why.

... and can't help but notice his lingering gaze on my eye patch... I suddenly became more interested in your OC when I read this. What can I say, eye patches are cool. Anyway, I think this is pretty good so far. Aside from a few grammatical things (which I may talk about later, due to being on a p...

BAD EMI. HISAO IS GOING TO BE WITH HANAKO AFTER THIS AND THAT'S FINAL.

Lawl, just kidding. I enjoyed this chapter. I think you did a good job with Rin, and if there were any typos (or whatever you kids call them) I didn't notice. Good job.

Huzzah, a new chapter! Rejoice, my friends!

If you couldn't tell, I like this story. Good job, mang.

TOO MUCH TALENT. CANNOT COMPUTE. ABORT. ABORT. ABORT. *head explodes*

If you couldn't tell, I really like these.

ZXNova wrote:When you imagine Hanako having a "conversation" with Samuel L. Jackson.

When you imagine that Samuel L. Jackson was Hanako's therapist the entire time, and that's the reason her therapy never worked.

"I-I really like this boy..."

"Does he look like a bitch?"

OH MY GOODNESS. Kenji is cray-cray. I like this idea, and you're not a bad writer, but I noticed that you seemed to leave out some punctuation after the dialogue. Ex. "This is a generic sentence" You would leave out the period like this quite often. The correct way would be: "This is ...

The thought that this is ending makes me sad. Then I think of what the next story could be about, and I'm happy again.

Sweet. Short. I like it Success! :D Every corner of her room is covered in clothes, stuffed animals, and pillows. So she's just the same as Scissor's Suzu? I just took her room idea from a picture on the Shimmie I saw of her room. If that was based on Scissorlip's Suzu, then all of the credit goes ...

Hello! I've decided that, after reading some of the amazing fanfiction here, I would try to do something productive. So, I wrote this (rather short) oneshot. The beginning is pretty rough, in my opinion, but that's just because I'm horrible at beginnings. And endings. And middles. :? I would apprec...

Oh my. Seems like both Emi and Hanako still have the hots for Hisao. How scandalous. Anyway, I liked this journey into Emi's mind. Nice chapter, keep it up.

For a second I thought Hisao was gonna say no, and I woulda been all like "Damn, Hisao, you one crazy son of a gun." But I liked this. There were some minor grammatical mistakes, but they never broke my immersion, so that's good. So yeah, nice story.

You just included all of the characters from K-On in this fic. +100 internets for you, sir.

Not sure how I didn't see this, but I'm glad I did, albeit a little late. Eagerly awaiting more.