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by Kyler Thatch
Sun Dec 22, 2013 4:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 479021

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov

You should probably spoiler the Satoru Miyoto bit--that one's supposed to stay under wraps. Noted. And, for the record, the April Fools chapter really isn't part of the canonical storyline--it was done entirely as a joke. I thought calling it the April Fools chapter made it clear enough that it was...
by Kyler Thatch
Sat Dec 21, 2013 8:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 479021

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov

Aaand, we're live. I'm sure someone can edit a better (possibly less spoilerish?) description in.
by Kyler Thatch
Sat Dec 21, 2013 12:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 479021

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov

I'm just about ready to start the page myself, but I need some help coming up with a description for the fic.
by Kyler Thatch
Tue Dec 17, 2013 5:24 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Yamaku's Swimming Pool
Replies: 273
Views: 94377

Re: Yamaku's Swimming Pool

I'd say Emi. She actually pushes her leg muscles to their limits. That, and she also has arms.
by Kyler Thatch
Sat Dec 14, 2013 12:45 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.
Replies: 155
Views: 87837

Re: The wrong reaction to a grave mistake.

If she does somehow grow from that, I can't imagine she'd grow into anything other than a hardened bitter cynic.
by Kyler Thatch
Tue Dec 10, 2013 10:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1198
Views: 985402

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route

TheGoatman wrote:I don't think I've read the Aiko or Misha routes though, what are their thread names?
"Tomorrow's Doom" and "For Want of a Nail", respectively.
by Kyler Thatch
Tue Dec 10, 2013 9:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Replies: 51
Views: 21242

Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13

Quite possibly an inaccurate extrapolation on my part, after he mentioned Taro working at the Beijing. My mistake.
by Kyler Thatch
Tue Dec 10, 2013 4:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Replies: 51
Views: 21242

Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13

The class passes rather uneventfully , with Mutou writing up some simple questions which I finish quickly . Leaving me to stare out the window blankly , my eyelids growing heavier. Overuse of words that end in -ly, I think. (Also, that second sentence sounds awkwardly phrased.) Unexplained lack of ...
by Kyler Thatch
Mon Dec 09, 2013 11:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1198
Views: 985402

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 12/9)

I like the characterization of Saki here. She's fun. :D

Haven't read the other Saki route myself, and from what I'm hearing, I'm not entirely sure if I should bother. If nothing else, at least, I don't want to get the two Saki's mixed up in my head.
by Kyler Thatch
Sat Dec 07, 2013 8:45 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Misha's disabillity?
Replies: 1050
Views: 368796

Re: Misha's disabillity?

I don't know about you, but the idea of a non-disabled kid studying at Yamaku sounds pretty interesting to me.
by Kyler Thatch
Fri Dec 06, 2013 8:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 35141

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (11/19)

I laughed at the Miki bit. "Delicate" my foot. :lol: Just as I’m about to sink into melancholy my Beatrice throws me a lifeline. With a few simple words she brings me out of the inferno. I doubt Hisao would have read that but nice anyway. What is "that", exactly? I'm afraid the r...
by Kyler Thatch
Fri Dec 06, 2013 4:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]
Replies: 15
Views: 5870

Re: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]

The One Steve Limit exists not because of any connection to the real world, but for the benefit of the reader. It's slightly less of a problem in this case if Akira Satou won't be in the story at all, but there's still the potential for confusion when someone has to pause to recall which Akira they'...
by Kyler Thatch
Thu Dec 05, 2013 4:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]
Replies: 15
Views: 5870

Re: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]

And is your Akira a boy or a girl? So far it's hard to tell. My gut feeling was "girl" until I read Kyler's post. Actually... that might have just been an assumption on my part. I'm used to thinking of Akira as a boy's name by default. But going back to the text, I can't find any proof to...
by Kyler Thatch
Thu Dec 05, 2013 3:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]
Replies: 15
Views: 5870

Re: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]

Hm... I'm pretty sure dyslexia isn't one of those things that someone would be sent to Yamaku for, since it's a learning disability and not a physical one. Unless, of course, there's something else wrong with him that has yet to even be hinted at. That, or he has something going on similar to Misha'...
by Kyler Thatch
Wed Dec 04, 2013 2:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
Replies: 169
Views: 1076079

Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)

I wish I had been reminded of this before I started posting my own story, but what's done is done. All I can add is that if you're releasing a story in parts, positive feedback can really fuel the temptation to push something out prematurely. Do not give in to that temptation. A weak product leaves ...