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Sharp-O wrote:"...a chatty blonde who spends half her time with a dick in her mouth.”

Isn't Saki make of paper? Don't be too rough or you'll ruin it for everyone.

As always, moe as ever, keep it up.

I'm glad everyone is liking Fuuka and don't worry, she will still be participating in the story but it's not going to be like Monomyth where the Akio-like character ends up having more of a starring role :lol: I'm not sure there's anything you could pull out for Fuuka that'll put her above Genki Ri...

and It wasn't all my idea remember! :D This is what you get for calling a character Rika :lol: Yeah, this Rika is the one from Cordially Invited. It's pretty strange to see my own writing with touches of your style, but I like it! Interesting to see how you finish it. I wonder if the crossover poin...

I started writing a follow up on Shizune in the snow regarding Kenji and the girls from Akio's bachelor party but wasn't really happy with it, so here's the Kenji I chopped up.



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I’m only getting so salt because senpai suck-butt here

Getting so salty?

It's the return of the characters we all know and love! Akio's still bi! Taro's still fat! Molly's... had a coffee? A new guy? Interesting.

Yes, it'll get explained but it's not going to be the focus and I hope everyone enjoys what's to come. I think the reason I enjoy this format is because it's like we're in Rika's brain. Rika wouldn't be standing around thinking about her past unless there was something that reminded her or prompted...

it goes without saying that you need to avoid anymore of these... flutters Roll credits? :lol: I've gotta say, this story seems to be moving kind of fast, and I like it. There wasn't 8 chapters establishing why the character came to Yamaku and what their favorite type of cereal is. I think it'd be ...

He offers and the larger Arai sighs noisily This makes it seem like there are two Taros of varying size. :lol: It's interesting to see where this is going. Did Hisao jump in to try and save Rika thinking she had a flutter? Did he have a flutter after thinking she had a flutter? Maybe nobody had a f...

I can definitely get behind this.

I never the first try at this so I'm looking at it with fresh eyes, don't know anything about the characters beside what's here. dormitorie's Dormitory's fridge? I reach out with my stub and pull the book towards me... ... how? Maybe I should of stayed in Tokyo Maybe I should have stayed in Tokyo. ....

I think the word you were going for is "choir" :-) There it is! I knew that wasn't right but my brain just wasn't working. This is what happens when you write after an all nighter. :lol: Sdiir Farsnow That's not anybody, Originally I was going to try find some pun that involves Suzu but c...

I wrote this after I realized that I hadn't read any stories about the weebs at Yamaku (besides that one fic where the guy had a fedora and was missing all of his limbs, I don't think anyone will ever top that one though.) It's not very good, but it's been sat on my hard drive for a while so I may a...

I really enjoyed this, you definitely encapsulated that feeling of being in love pretty well.

Interesting! I'm looking forward to where you go with this.

There are a couple places where you swapped tense or mis-typed/spelled, but I don't feel it really detracted from the story that hard. Still, I'd recommend finding a proofreader or editor to help out.

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Definitely enjoyable, didn't see the twist!