Katawa Shoujo Forums

Damn, this Lilly looks so cute, I love it.

The first girl I got was Emi, like a lot of people. I think that a lot of people get Emi first since her route is the easiest to get. Then, I get Lilly, Hanako, Rin and Shizune, in that order. I'm not a sports-like person, but I kinda like Emi's personality. But I don't think it would be a good matc...

As I told you on Discord, this is a strange pairing, but also a very pleasant one. Even if it's strange, it kinda works, I'm amazed, to be honest. The whole thing was extremely cute, I love it, and it comes from someone who wasn't a Rin fan at all (now I kinda like her). I really love your writing s...

**Pretends to discover the chapter** This is a good chapter, I have to say. I'll look your music mistakes for the next chapters :twisted: But this is a good chapter, as I told you, and I wonder what Hisao would give to the band with his current level, there is a good perspective of evolution for him...

The only thing I want to do now is to shake both Hisao and Rin, and yell at them to stop acting like that, talking to each other frankly, and recover from this situation. Situations like that are not good for anyone, and, given the turn of events, I'm not even sure if they want to recover from this ...

The only complain I have about it is its unfinished character. I really want to know the developments, but I think we won't have the end of the story, which is quite a shame. It started great, I really like stories like this one that deal about "a few years later" events, it offers a lot o...

So, for the first chapter, there are two things I would "complain" about. I'm not a huge fan of the "I rewrite the VN" but at least, you manage to add more original content in the chapter. Also, I don't understand what's the point to add the choices from the game, directly in you...

The only thing I need to say is : They need to stay together. They need it. Your writing, buddy, is, as always, very good. Knowing that Akira will leave when Hisao told her she loves her, and she basically told him the same thing, just make me curious about how the situation would be resolved. About...

It seems like this story had the desired affect on you! I'm glad that you found the story to be heart-warming, and that you found the flashbacks to be effective rather than intrusive—which was a worry of mine when I first posted the story. Thank you for writing this comment, Razoredge. It sure made...

This is to say to people they have to read your story. You know quite well what I'm thinking about your story, and you know that I love it. Someday, if you think I don't, just read our conversation, and you'll see that I love it. Ritsu deserves some love, she's lovely. You have great ideas for your ...

It comes from someone who's not currently a Rin fan (but your work is achieving a bit too much for my own sake to make me care about her, and even like her), but it was wholesome. Initially when I saw that Hanako and Rin were living together, I was like "Oh, it's comedy time". But what you...

That pairing was something I didn't expected, and for a surprise, it was a really pleasant one. And the lil flashbacks you add in the story are just... well.... wholesome. Everything is at its place, nothing feels out of place. Everything is heart-warming, and the final part with Lilly talking like ...

The fact Rin is not my favorite girl is not a secret to anyone. But the more I read your story, the more I begin to appreciate her, in a odd way, but I'm not even complaining, you actually do a great job about that. The turns of events your story had recently was something I did not expected, to be ...

This piece is a lovely one, I really love pieces or stories that are set in the future, and talk about the life of the characters. It's always interesting to see the vision of the characters' future people can have, and this piece was a lovely one. The fact that Lilly, Hisao and Hanako are living to...

Thanks Odd. I took the risk but I was worried, thinking it would seem forced. I never did something like that, and I'm glad you potentially liked this first try. Writing a Saki's path will be difficult, but I'm proud of trying new things, and I hope you'll like my vision of her.