In fairness, Rika's had a year of this shit already and then adding Saki basically threatening to steal her boyfriend is gonna rustle her jimmies something fierce.
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- Wed Sep 06, 2023 9:06 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 179517
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Six: Ukemi [5/9/23]
- Tue Sep 05, 2023 4:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Asoko Desu's one-shots and short pieces ( September 12 / 2023 - Shake, Shake, Shake )
- Replies: 37
- Views: 58664
Re: Asoko Desu's one-shots and short pieces ( July 24/2023 - Noughts and Crosses )
Trying to figure out why characters say what their say and do what they do is very much my ‘thing’ (I hear that’s also how some actors get into a role), although it's not to everyone's taste as a writing style -- that and extending a situation to it’s extreme logical conclusion (although I suspect ...
- Tue Sep 05, 2023 9:38 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 179517
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Six: Ukemi [5/9/23]
“What the hell was that , Rika!?” Fuuka finally vocalises her concern away from prying ears, in the relative safety of the changing rooms. I try to shake off the blood red pulsing behind my eyes, bracing myself against the wall. “W-what? She h-had it coming.” I croak, swallowing hard. That scream re...
- Tue Sep 05, 2023 8:58 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Asoko Desu's one-shots and short pieces ( September 12 / 2023 - Shake, Shake, Shake )
- Replies: 37
- Views: 58664
Re: Asoko Desu's one-shots and short pieces ( July 24/2023 - Noughts and Crosses )
Thank you! It was fun to write - glad you enjoyed it! I really like these kinds of one-shot's that recontextualise KS into a different kind of space. My version of this kind of story is Lost & Found , a future with AI. Speaking of, I've been reading Flutter and very much enjoying it - your styl...
- Mon Sep 04, 2023 6:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Asoko Desu's one-shots and short pieces ( September 12 / 2023 - Shake, Shake, Shake )
- Replies: 37
- Views: 58664
Re: Asoko Desu's one-shots and short pieces ( July 24/2023 - Noughts and Crosses )
Oh, I like this. This is my kind of wacky nonsense. Great job, Asoko!
- Thu Aug 31, 2023 11:49 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 179517
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Five: Devil Trigger [31/8/23]
Summer is supposed to be a time of new experiences, not of sitting in my room and studying. While knuckling-down is a new experience for me but it’s definitely not one I’m enjoying so far. I’m so thankful that I know some smart people, otherwise this whole mission of self-improvement would be very s...
- Wed Aug 30, 2023 8:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
- Replies: 35
- Views: 19412
Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 3 August 20th, 2023]
Helluva fic, Stealth! You're really putting in the hard yards and it's really paying off!
- Mon Aug 28, 2023 2:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 179517
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Four: Labbing [27/8/23]
It's a school full of emotionally vulnerable, hormonally-charged disasters. It's probably easier to be cavalier with the contraceptives than tell them not to fuck each other
- Sun Aug 27, 2023 1:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 179517
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Four: Labbing [27/8/23]
A chorus of boys cheering and wolf-whistles fill the air as Hisao and I leave the common area, hand-in-hand. I would usually feel more self-conscious with all the attention but declaring your love for someone kinda makes you feel invincible. Especially when they reciprocate Luckily Akio and his boyf...
- Sun Aug 27, 2023 11:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 16/6/2023)
- Replies: 65
- Views: 59429
Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 16/6/2023)
I echo a lot of what other people have said; your Rin feels very authentic to the source material and while she's not my favourite character, I do appreciate the love you've shown to keeping her consistent here. I also want to give you props for how your writing style improved over subsequent chapte...
- Sat Aug 26, 2023 10:07 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 179517
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Three: No Johns [22/8/23]
So much sugar, and the drama is done very well, even if at times it feels a bit mellow dramatic. Teenagers are little cringey goblins though, so who’s to complain! I think I've firmly established that my brand is "sugar, melodrama, and cringe" :lol: Really vivid and easy to imagine all th...
- Wed Aug 23, 2023 4:44 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 179517
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Three: No Johns [22/8/23]
Two chapters within a week of each other? Sharp-O it's not even my birthday! I'm certainly not going to be going daily anytime soon but I'm a couple chapters ahead so there should be regular updates! Very cute and glad to see your Rika is still as cute as ever - had a re-read of the whole thing whi...
- Tue Aug 22, 2023 4:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 179517
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty Three: No Johns [22/8/23]
Mountain air fills my lungs as I take a long, deep breath, stretching out my arms and back. Home-sweet-home, how I’ve missed you Sendai. The trip back to Yamaku was uneventful and mostly spent helping Hisao on his Diamond play through; by which I mean grinding levels for my boyfriend who indulged in...
- Tue Aug 22, 2023 1:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
- Replies: 47
- Views: 35318
Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Oh man, this fic is rich and dense! Like a black forest gateaux! Really enjoyed what you've done so far, Talmar!
- Mon Aug 21, 2023 7:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Quick Cab Ride. (Hisao X Misha Drabble.)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3209
Re: A Quick Cab Ride. (Hisao X Misha Drabble.)
Well, that's very spicy! Nice work, Calamity.