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Nice update, curious to see if any more comes of the letter hiding. Also Misha, no! Why would you do that?

Hoitash wrote: ↑Mon Dec 03, 2018 9:57 pm
Good update. Bad Misha, no biscuit.

Is that a Cowboy Bebop reference?

This one was much better! Poor Hisao just can't seem to catch a break in your fics though. Picked up a few rough spots for you; She felt a little guilty fooling him so, leading him along like an obedient little puppy, but. Only a little. The end of this bit looks a bit awkward, either get rid of the...

I really enjoyed this, one of very few poly fics that actually comes across as being a believable situation. I particularly enjoyed the little asides as you fade to black a few times there.

The Meiko story felt a little flat to me. I kind of get what you were going for with the "Oh by the way they've been bonking during this whole conversation" thing, but I'm not sure it worked. The other thing that bothered me is Emi apparently being fine with sharing her boyfriend with her ...

Oh Hisao, you poor foolish boy!

The change of POVs there was a little confusing at times but an enjoyable crack fic anyway.

And now for something completely different! I wrote this whilst I was struggling to sleep the other night. Poetry isn't something I've really done too much of before but thought I'd try my hand at it. I'm not going to offend the purists by trying to claim this is a haiku, but it's certainly haiku i...

Well that was a wild ride! Had me chuckling out loud in a few places there! I agree with Oddball in that it reads more as a parody but it's a lot of fun exactly because it doesn't take itself too seriously. Also Crafty, that smut reversal theory has got me thinking far too much for this early in the...

Glad you all enjoyed it, thanks for the feedback! I like Hanako, and double like lewd Hanako. And triple like yuri Hanako >.> Speaking of yuri Hanako, that last one was actually partly inspired by your unexpectedly sweet Hanako x Misha fix. One comment I have is that I think some of your sentences t...

Thanks Oddball, much appreciated! Sorry it's taken six months to reply. Anyway, had an idea crawl into my head and wouldn't go away so I wrote it down. I'm sorry, I don't know why I'm like this. I guess NSFW warnings and such apply. Comfort Food Misha looks so sad and vulnerable sat on the edge of ...

Really enjoyed this one Crafty, I liked how as the layers got deeper things got weirder and more dreamlike! As others have mentioned, the end of Emi's chapter was a bit disturbing and Misha's outbursts were an interesting take.

Edit: Removed a question that could have been seen as requesting.

First off, I am so impressed with the consistency and quantity of your work here, what is the word count so far on this? Especially given a lot of the responses you have had have been less than positive it's impressive that you have stuck with it. Speaking of which, there's definitely room for impro...

Very enjoyable little romp there Oddball, your sense of humour shines through as usual. I agree with Crafty on the ending though, felt like it ended a bit abruptly. Other than that, couple of minor SPaG issues (couple of instances of a instead of I) but overall a good concept, well executed.

Just read through this for the first time today and it was refreshing to see them actually being working adults. As many others have said before me, this more mature and open Lilly is a nice change of pace while still retaining the feel of being the same person, just with a bit more life under her b...

Well, if you discount the fact that this was completely OOC for everyone but Akira it wasn't bad :-) Yeah I kind of felt that especially for Hanako, but went with it anyway as it was just a short for practice. Please note that "not bad" is about as good a rating as I will give any H-scene...

Thanks everyone for the kind words, it means a lot, especially having read the excellent works that some of you have elsewhere in this forum! I'm currently working on something a bit longer but that is far from ready to show, but in the meantime I realised I've never actually tried my hand at any H...