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@ PKMN Trainer Red Heh I was in a very similar situation as yours. I think Sisterhood was my first fanfiction read ever... well if I discount the rather short "A runner's afternoon" and it completely blew me away. Now here's the good part: but I doubt I will ever run into another piece of ...

This story continues to be an excellent read for me. At this point however I sort of want to remove myself from the entire discussion, in particular speculation, to enjoy the story a bit more purely. Since you've gotten so many avid readers by now there's just too, too much speculation and people st...

The whole school paper thing is a bit alien to me anyways. I don't know, smaller 'what's happening at school' issues here and there are normal. But, at least here in Germany, I'd be rather surprised if a well regarded school had a school newspaper where you find articles about rather private relatio...

Hmm gotta say this story lacks the proper amount of character depth that's so alluring about KS in the first place. Emi in particular just seemed like your typical unlikable girlfriend character that obviously doesn't care as much about her boyfriend as one would hope and appeared very one-dimension...

@ Munchenhausen I'm not certain of course but this seems more like a one-shot? So except for the last quarter it all seems reasonably in-character. I think one could argue about Hanako being a bit more forthcoming but it's not too stretched and partially okay because it's part of the premise I suppo...

Hmm this is one of those very short stories that I'm not quite sure what to think about... if there even is much to consider in the first place. Hanako does something that goes against her character and behavior and can hardly be called a prequel because doing all that would most likely mean that Ha...

Yeah, it's amazing how she treats them both so horribly that you could only list one justifiable example against only one of them. Well, it's just one example, but it's quite a major one and she keeps it up for weeks - basically throughout their whole relationship. Yeah that aspect actually kinda s...

In any case, something does feel off about the characterization of the Satou parents, but I can't put my finger on it. I'd think that they'd be a little more direct about things, but then, Lilly is anything but direct about a lot of things herself... Hm, you mean in this story? Because that seemed ...

Good job again. Was wondering if we'd get an Emi chapters this time around or maybe even Hanako already... Then, surprise, it's Lilly!

Woah, third person, past tense narration feels super weird now when most other fanfics, and the VN itself of course, are first person narrator and in present tense. Though 'Closure' had a very good third-person narration... Anyways, so far pretty good. Again, this kind of narration just feels a bit ...

Yeh pretty solid chapter. Miki's lacking grades and overall struggle to keep up with most of the subjects will probably be a major conflict as we go along.

^ That was actually something else I considered pointing out. Writing sex scenes is extremely hard and on top of it I don't know how Hotkey intended those scenes to come over but... while the "penis spasms inside of her" bit just read badly that whole parfait 'business'... well that was al...

Was actually quite curious at the beginning. This taking place roughly 15 years ahead of KS and Hanako meeting Hisao/Misha through her child? Count me in. Also quite liked the idea of naming the child Misha and all. Introducing the story via Hanako's POV and then just abruptly ending the second chap...

Granted we don't know her character very well yet. I mean, I went through the Lilly route recently and while I can recall her short part of it after you mentioning that I simply can't remember her characterization, if there was much of it to begin with. For how short her appearance was, there's eno...

Ah interesting! Really wasn't sure how to interpret her, although her 'tone' didn't seem hostile I just considered her wanting part of this 'sexgod' Hisao a bit more out there. Granted we don't know her character very well yet. I mean, I went through the Lilly route recently and while I can recall h...