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by Sharp-O
Mon Dec 11, 2023 11:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
Replies: 28
Views: 55857

Re: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection

My Secret Santa for Lap - Tender & Wild - is done!

Thanks for letting me join in this year! It was quite fun and I can't wait to read everyone else's stories! :D

by Sharp-O
Mon Dec 11, 2023 10:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24
Replies: 376
Views: 215781

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Tender & Wild" (SS23) 12/12/23

Tender & Wild (SS23 for Lap) https://64.media.tumblr.com/9294322412aac4a28986f8f3374eedb4/12cf1bcf3f902a35-ee/s1280x1920/bc3306e065e60c6496489a57466a7d4a97d2000a.pnj ‘Twas the night before winter break, as we approached the girls’ dorm We were all there to partake, Of camaraderie most warm “I’m...
by Sharp-O
Sun Dec 10, 2023 7:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Stealthy's Shorts [Newest Addition: Dec. 10th, 2023. - "Dash and Dine"]
Replies: 13
Views: 7919

Re: Stealthy's Shorts [Newest Addition: Dec. 10th, 2023. - "Dash and Dine"]

What a wonderful bit of fluff, Stealthy! It was really cute and felt in-character for the pairings, including the new additions. I liked Ken and Rika's dynamic, both physical and interpersonal, being a reflection of Hisao and Emi's. I'm glad you enjoyed the exercise and really embraced the fluff wee...
by Sharp-O
Mon Dec 04, 2023 10:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Anarchy from the UK - (Molly one-shot/pilot)
Replies: 10
Views: 4935

Re: Anarchy from the UK - (Molly one-shot/pilot)

Street Fighter - Yamaku Edition :-) I always enjoy seeing a different take on characters than what they usually are like, so this ticks all the right boxes. I do agree with Scramblers that the colloquialisms are a bit over the top... Imo, less would be more in this case. I do enjoy the harder edge ...
by Sharp-O
Mon Dec 04, 2023 10:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Directional Influence [22/1/24]
Replies: 33
Views: 33851

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Okiagari [30/11/23]

Anyway, the medical stuff aside, those were really great additions to the main story - and it feels as if more happened in those two or three days than in the two or three months before that. :-) The medical stuff was always going to let me down but I tried my best with it. I especially appreciate ...
by Sharp-O
Wed Nov 29, 2023 8:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Directional Influence [22/1/24]
Replies: 33
Views: 33851

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Okiagari [30/11/23]

~ Saki ~ “Up and at ’em, Saki.” A gentle wake-up call brings me out of the deepest sleep I’ve had in a while. I rub my eyes and my vision focuses on the mass of white and green standing over me. “ Taro ? What time is it?” I wince as I rise, my body not wanting to wake up just yet. The boy who offer...
by Sharp-O
Wed Nov 22, 2023 5:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
Replies: 315
Views: 177557

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Two: Touch of Death

So, it has been a while since I read the start of this series. I know I should restart from the beginning, but right now I'm trying to catch up with all the stuff that was posted since I was last here, so that will have to wait. It does mean that I don't really remember OCs like Fuuka, though... Ge...
by Sharp-O
Mon Nov 20, 2023 1:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Directional Influence [22/1/24]
Replies: 33
Views: 33851

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Delayed Inputs (18+) [18/11/23]

As much as she wants to break away from her past life, there was always going to be something that inextricably tied her to the past and if she has to choose; why not make it a good memory. Maybe the only good memory.

by Sharp-O
Sat Nov 18, 2023 12:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Directional Influence [22/1/24]
Replies: 33
Views: 33851

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Delayed Inputs (18+) [18/11/23]

~ Fuuka ~ Jiro gives me the tour of his room but it’s not all that different to most of the other dorm rooms I’ve seen, barring the odd decoration and a very interesting piece of furniture. “You have a futon instead of a bed?” I ask, curious about the large sofa-like piece of furniture where most o...
by Sharp-O
Fri Nov 17, 2023 7:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Directional Influence [22/1/24]
Replies: 33
Views: 33851

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Degrees of Freedom [14/11/23]

Snapping SIM card was a very powerful gesture. It's one of the many steps to distance herself from the past and make sure she can't fall into old habits. Hoh boy, The fallout from those messages is definitely gonna make its rounds. There's no going back now Saki, you're all in now. Redemption arc i...
by Sharp-O
Thu Nov 16, 2023 10:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Consequences of Comfort
Replies: 11
Views: 13968

Re: Consequences of Comfort

Hot damn, what an emotionally resonant story! Genuinely got choked up during Shiina and Shizune's conversation. Fantastic work on this, Lap!

by Sharp-O
Tue Nov 14, 2023 1:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Directional Influence [22/1/24]
Replies: 33
Views: 33851

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Degrees of Freedom [14/11/23]

~ Fuuka ~ “I want you to know - with all the affection I have for you as Rika’s boyfriend - that you are fucking stupid , Hisao.” I stare at Hisao in utter disbelief. He attempts to defend himself but with his mouth full of a bread-y lunch, he has no choice but to sit there and take my righteous an...
by Sharp-O
Tue Nov 07, 2023 1:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Directional Influence [22/1/24]
Replies: 33
Views: 33851

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Multiplayer [07/11/23]

~ Hisao ~ “So what happened in there, Fuuka?” I ask gently, crouching down to meet Fuuka’s eyeline, even though she tries her best not to meet mine. Fuuka grips her hands together tightly, leaning against her knees, head hung low. Rui pats my shoulder as she enters Rika’s room again and leaves us a...
by Sharp-O
Sat Nov 04, 2023 5:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-13 added 27-02-2022
Replies: 58
Views: 46703

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-13 added 27-02-2022

I like Kaori. Her thought process is unique and interesting in how it's portrayed but I'm wondering if that's partly due to English being your second language. I like her sisterly relationship with Saki and her condition is definitely unique and interesting for a fic that is primarily about hooking ...
by Sharp-O
Thu Nov 02, 2023 8:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Directional Influence [22/1/24]
Replies: 33
Views: 33851

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Player Two [02/11/23]

Calling Iwanako for advice? Hisao, you have no damn sense of tact. The man is dumb as bricks and I refuse to let him be anything else. :lol: First off, there isn’t a doctor (or friend) in the world who would lead off with “She died,” unless they’re a sadist who hates the person they’re talking to. ...