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by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 03, 2023 1:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Don't Leave Me Behind: The story of Hara Iwanako [chapter 3: 22.10.2023]
Replies: 8
Views: 3446

Re: Don't Leave Me Behind: The story of Hara Iwanako [chapter 3: 22.10.2023]

The question, that I trying to answer here: what if Iwanako didn't gave up? What if she tries to pursue Hisao after his stay in hospital? Okay, when I read this I did not expect she would (inadvertently) throw herself in front of a truck to "pursue" him. :-) Overall a very nice start. Not...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 03, 2023 1:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)
Replies: 31
Views: 9848

Re: Learning to Run (Emi and Hisao Reconnect in their 30s) (COMPLETE)

So... It stretches credulity a bit that Emi would still be affected this much after so much time, but setting that aside, Emis problem and Hisao's experiences with Saki do synergize nicely. Good job on realizing that and making it into a story! I'm not sure if it was intentional, but 16 years after ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 03, 2023 10:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
Replies: 35
Views: 17586

Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 3 August 20th, 2023]

Honestly it's been a long-held small bit of anxiety seeing your presence around the forums before now and anticipating your response to my writing. Welcome back and glad to see you here! Thanks for the consideration. I'm slowly working my way through the stuff I missed. Yours took me a while to get...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Dec 02, 2023 7:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 4 March 10th, 2024]
Replies: 35
Views: 17586

Re: Uncertainty (A Post Emi-Good Ending Story) [Act 1 Scene 3 August 20th, 2023]

It's been a while since this has been posted, and Feurox already made most of the more important points, but since you clearly put a lot of effort in this I want to give at least a bit of feedback. At first I felt that the accident just two days after the end of the main story was laying on the dram...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Dec 01, 2023 9:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
Replies: 27
Views: 53773

Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection

Seasonal Greatings everyone! It's time for the annual Secret Santa ! The prompts have been sent out; so I'm opening the collection thread now. As always using this thread to post your story is encouraged but not mandatory. If you decide to post it elsewhere I will just put up the link the the story ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Nov 30, 2023 4:34 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Arrhythmia & Coffein
Replies: 4
Views: 9626

Arrhythmia & Coffein

Saw a video earlier about the case of a woman with arrhythmia who died after drinking a (heavily) caffeinated lemonade and the legal ramifications. I don't know either the drink or the company, and I can't judge whether or not they did enough to warn about the content of their drink, but imo if the ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Nov 23, 2023 5:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
Replies: 315
Views: 175239

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Two: Touch of Death

It was the first thing in my mind when you mentioned she didn't know her dad: She seemed to get along so well with Hisao's dad, that it would make it quite ironic, and the two DO have similar congenital conditions... Not that I advocate for a plot turn like that, mind you. It would still be a very b...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Nov 21, 2023 9:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
Replies: 315
Views: 175239

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Two: Touch of Death

So, it has been a while since I read the start of this series. I know I should restart from the beginning, but right now I'm trying to catch up with all the stuff that was posted since I was last here, so that will have to wait. It does mean that I don't really remember OCs like Fuuka, though... A f...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Nov 21, 2023 2:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1197
Views: 907053

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/12)

It's called "Yamaku Academy".
Not sure if you need an invite to join, but I'll tag this post there, so someone should contact you.

by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 17, 2023 5:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1197
Views: 907053

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/12)

First of all, congratulations on your engagement. Second, congrats on being finally on the home stretch with this story - probably the longest running story around here. The mood has been sober for a while now, and it has been clear for a while that the story is not headed for a rainbows and sunshin...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Nov 16, 2023 1:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Trapped all the Same - An unfulfilled SS20 Prompt for Lap
Replies: 12
Views: 7758

Re: Trapped all the Same - An unfulfilled SS20 Prompt for Lap

Okay, having “made it through that some 20K words” – I can say two things: You again didn’t manage to write a short story and You again managed to write a damn good one. Okay, I can say a bit more… Having read this story end to end with “Empty Space” they do feel quite similar. There are (surprising...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Nov 16, 2023 10:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go (SS21 For Brythain)
Replies: 14
Views: 26646

Re: An Empty Space Where a Person Should Go (SS21 For Brythain)

Apparently I once told Feurox that he was incapable of writing short stories... I don't really remember that - or the context - but it certainly holds true for this one: this is easily among the longest Secret Santa stories we've had. Now what I am certain of is that I've never told him that he was ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Nov 16, 2023 8:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Kijo
Replies: 148
Views: 120565

Re: Katawa Kijo

Thank you for the praise! I may not check the forums as regularly as I once did, but it is always nice to find a post like this waiting when I come back. As for the pacing, that was very much intentional. I wanted to include sonething of releveance for the plot / character development in every scene...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jan 06, 2023 5:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Years That the Locusts Have Eaten (complete)
Replies: 45
Views: 43543

Re: The Years That the Locusts Have Eaten

Asoko_Desu wrote: Thu Jan 05, 2023 10:10 pm [ checks reasearch notes ] I don't think I've pushed the boundaries of 'noticability', but at 12 weeks people should be able to notice something's happening - feel free to DM me any hint...
Sure. You've got mail :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jan 05, 2023 7:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Years That the Locusts Have Eaten (complete)
Replies: 45
Views: 43543

Re: The Years That the Locusts Have Eaten

Some interesting stylistic choices there.
Though pregnancy works a bit differently in the real world than in your story...