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“Don’t laugh at my car! Kintaro might not look like much but he gets me where I need to go!” Miki frowns defensively, only making Molly’s small chuckle grow louder. “You named it?” She asks, patting the red rust bucket gently on its roof. “Hell yeah, I named him!” Miki emphasises the gender, placin...

So far, this story is shaping up to be okay, and I'm hoping it won't be abandoned like the other attempts at Naomi/Natsume routes, but there is one thing I noticed with this scene. After Hisao's heart episode, I think you missed the part where they end up in the nurse's office. It just goes from His...

Even though this was only tangentially related to KS, it was still a pretty decent read. I'm interested to see how you're going to tie this into the world of KS if you do continue it.

This is probably my favorite piece on the forums after the Akira pseudo-route. Hisao is a complete and utter idiot here, and I love it. You've left me wondering how he's going to pull himself out of this predicament without completely fucking himself over.

This chapter was great. I really like the sense of anxiety you've written into the story. One of my problems with the original VN was that even in its most tense moments, nothing really felt urgent to me, whereas reading this, I've constantly felt on edge, even in the story's happiest moments. Somet...

Well, that was a nice chapter. Seems like you put a lot of work in. Good to see you back in action, EBJ.