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And here's the latest from the Stiles Random Writing Contest! I chose the prompt of Misha x Rin at the track. No, they don't go into the track shed, even though of course my mind went there! It's in fact smut free. For this story I wanted to try writing something that was at least somewhat more seri...

What an excellent comment to get! Seeing a response like that, nearly a year after completion, really makes me happy I actually sat down and did this thing. I'm glad you liked the use of group scenes, I've probably said it a bunch by now, but I felt there was so much untapped potential there from th...

Daww that's cute. It does feel that it ends a tad early, possibly a result of the contest deadline.

As far as random smut goes it's pretty good. Not exceptional but enjoyable--continue down this path and you may go far, young padawan. Prepare for potential negative comments over using the gaylord meme though. Doesn't bother me from the "memes automatically bad" viewpoint, but I will say ...

Short and fun! Very similar concept to the Rin x Kenji one that I wrote, though I imagine that's coincidental. Just goes to show great minds think alike. Also, after that last line, you are never allowed to get onto me for memes, forced jokes, etc. ever again

Man that hurt to read. In the sense of how effective it was in making you feel things fall apart for the characters, not in the sense of it being badly written, of course. I like Suzu's portrayal as anti-fragile, as someone that is still able to force herself to do what she needs to even after it ne...

I guess this is a good opportunity for me to mention that I adore this story, probably to no one's surprise. What I liked most about it was how effective and consistent it was in teasing the love triangle without actually going through on it (yet), with one amusing situation piled on top of another....

There's no description of the sexual acts, you're just told that they're occurring. I guess it's a little lewd

Thanks for all the comments by the way! People really seemed to like this one.

That was a very nice story. As Crafty said, sugar levels were high all around. Nothing wrong with an earnest and sweet story sometimes.

you can leave the other type of stories to me

Could this be Evil Lilly's first mistake? Seeing her hoist by her own petard would be glorious... Thank-you, I enjoyed this immensely! So did Lilly ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) If her story continues, going on to regret this move would certainly be a potential plot thread.... hmm..... Alright, it seems like it's th...

Damn we never got to find out which girl it was with Hisao huh? I'm guessing Emi though maybe Rin also fits. The story feels like setup which then ends before its payoff, but that's just my typical preferences playing this out into a Yuuko x Hisao route/story.

Such detailed thoughts for a second time--I thank you once again! First off since you gave me permission! I'm going to share the music piece you composed based on this story, because someone literally making music over my fanfic is way too cool for me to not post: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YdG...

Chapter 11 I don’t know what gods or goddesses are watching over me but I’ll be sure to thank them tonight. Somehow, no one is in the hall to see me flee into the bathroom in my shirt and boxers, Rika having run in there with my pants held hostage. Then as soon as I get inside I realize why I had s...

Chapter 10 Eventually Rika’s breathing slows back to normal and the tears on my shoulder start to dry. I know she’s finished when she gives me another ineffectual whack to my side. I squeeze her in response, keeping her wrapped snugly in my arms. “It wasn’t supposed to be like this…” Rika mutters i...

Then nothing Hisao does after that actually counts as his behavior, according to this logic, No, it doesn't but since you seem to be either unable or unwilling to understand the point I was trying to make I see no reason to continue this discussion. You asked for feedback, but if you're not willing...