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by BlackRockHanako
Mon May 07, 2012 7:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
Replies: 54
Views: 21905

Re: Scattered Scenes - 'Hanako, TUW' added 5/7

I admit to not having seen the anime (nor having any intention of doing so in the future) but does she really fire SHELLS? You know, as in those things, each of which is probably larger than Hanako's entire arm... And then many of them? I do not set very high standards to the realism of sci-fi stor...
by BlackRockHanako
Mon May 07, 2012 6:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
Replies: 54
Views: 21905

Scattered Scenes - 'Hanako, TUW' added 5/7

Hanako, The Ultimate Weapon While Saikano is, undoubtedly, one of the worse anime series I have seen (Apart from the OVA, which was actually pretty decent due to lack of Shuji) I felt the sudden urge to write this. Who knows! -------------------------- High above the city a figure flies through the...
by BlackRockHanako
Sun May 06, 2012 7:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lost Memories (Chapter 2 added) (WIP)
Replies: 29
Views: 14754

Re: Lost Memories my (not so) little fan fiction (WIP)

Maybe you should consider posting smaller portions... I don't know about other people here, but I mostly check the forums in the mornings before I'm off to work, and simply don't have time to read half a novel... Following on from this, is there any reason you can't post the pieces in this thread i...
by BlackRockHanako
Wed May 02, 2012 4:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: turbulentDuvet's KS Fanfics <3 [23/9]
Replies: 34
Views: 15601

Re: Looking, seeing, noticing. A Fanfic for Lilly fans.

It was a nice little read, nice going!

Also, capitalize the first letter of every new sentence, even if it's in speech marks.
by BlackRockHanako
Tue May 01, 2012 6:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
Replies: 54
Views: 21905

Re: Scattered Scenes - 'Comforts' added 5/1

>Comfort Lilly >Refuse Why do you always post these on /vg/ in pastebins prior to posting them on the forums? I post them one after the other at around the same time, not everyone in the KSG goes on the forums and vice versa, I guess. Or do you mean why don't I just post them here and link here in ...
by BlackRockHanako
Tue May 01, 2012 5:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
Replies: 54
Views: 21905

Re: Scattered Scenes - 'Comforts' added 5/1

Comforts (Doggy Style) People wanted Lilly. I dunno. -------------------------- She hit the ground hard, the impact rattling through the wrists she had flung out in front of her at the last second. Lilly could feel the cold, slimy mud that now coated her bare legs beneath her skirt, and felt more o...
by BlackRockHanako
Tue May 01, 2012 3:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Bakes a Cake (Short One-Shot)
Replies: 19
Views: 7788

Re: Hanako Bakes a Cake (Short One-Shot)

Would be a fun premise for yandere Hanako, 'now a part of me will always be inside you, Hisao!'. But as it is, this didn't do it for me. Maybe try and flesh it out a bit more? (Pun not intended)
by BlackRockHanako
Mon Apr 30, 2012 2:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 134835

Re: Shower Scenes

Oddball wrote:Well, it's already gone to the shower, where else do you want it to go? :wink:
Harem hot tub scene
by BlackRockHanako
Mon Apr 30, 2012 2:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 134835

Re: Shower Scenes

Beoran wrote:Interesting idea, I 'm curious where this is going. :)
I think we all know where you want it to go.
by BlackRockHanako
Mon Apr 30, 2012 8:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: What Lies Beneath: Updated 5/15/12 Chapter 5 now up
Replies: 49
Views: 19339

Re: What Lies Beneath: Updated 4/30/12 Chapter 4 now up

Can't wait for Kenji personality to come out.

'Oh god, they trapped me in a woman's body!'
by BlackRockHanako
Fri Apr 27, 2012 3:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Piano on the Floor (Shizune vs. Emi, New post 5-4-12)
Replies: 21
Views: 7263

Re: The Piano on the Floor (Shizune and Emi combined route)

Brogurt wrote:I know I heard someone on /vg/ talking of writing a scene where Emi and Shizune compete to give Hisao a blowjob

Is this related in some way?
The Big Blowjob Bonanza? I hope so.
by BlackRockHanako
Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
Replies: 54
Views: 21905

Re: Scattered Scenes - 'The Letter' added 4/26

Edit: You know what, I can't be bothered with this shit. Accuse me of getting mad for no reason all you like, fact is i'm not mad at all I don't expect anybody to like what I post, you however...well.
What the fuck is your problem?
Woah, internet badass alert, don't hurt me miss.
by BlackRockHanako
Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
Replies: 54
Views: 21905

Re: Scattered Scenes - 'The Letter' added 4/26

...not even the implication that she's carrying a recessive heart problem gene as well, so any kids she and Hisao might have will have strong odds of inheriting a similar problem? But yeah, adopted or not she's still going to love her parents, and the real father might be dead by now as well and cl...
by BlackRockHanako
Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
Replies: 54
Views: 21905

Re: Scattered Scenes - 'The Letter' added 4/26

Why would it make hanabros mad?
by BlackRockHanako
Thu Apr 26, 2012 4:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scattered Scenes - 'Rin's Itch' added 5/20
Replies: 54
Views: 21905

Re: Scattered Scenes - 'The Letter' added 4/26

The Letter Not much to say about this one, it is what it is. Constructive criticism always welcome, and indeed it feels needed on this quick piece. Thanks. -------------------------- Hanako, I don’t really know how to start this. I guess ‘hi’ is as good a place to start as any…Hi. So you’re twenty ...