Lovely chapter once again .
When saki rang and she was crying I remembered about her father taking her somewhere. My first thought was quite possibly an arranged marriage candidate, until another reviewer mentioned tests. Both could/would in her being dismayed.
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- Fri Jun 22, 2018 4:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
- Replies: 1197
- Views: 906054
- Tue Jun 05, 2018 3:47 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5178
Re: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
Interesting.
Is Iwanako about to give poor old Hisao another flutter?
I like the premise and hope to read more . says the guy whose taken an 11 month hiatus lol
Is Iwanako about to give poor old Hisao another flutter?
I like the premise and hope to read more . says the guy whose taken an 11 month hiatus lol
- Sat Jun 02, 2018 4:11 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
- Replies: 48
- Views: 32470
Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 10: Pain (28/07/2017)
It's been over a year? Whoops lol. I have notes for all upcoming chapters. Distracted by jobs, YouTube channel and 3 other stories (non fan fiction) I've got in the works. I should really continue it
- Tue Sep 19, 2017 4:09 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Help me please!
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4401
Re: Help me please!
I know of the story you're on about, but I also can't remember the name. It could possibly be on fanfiction?
- Fri Aug 11, 2017 3:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 32453
Re: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
I have an inkling that the culprit will be Naomi
- Fri Jul 28, 2017 12:23 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
- Replies: 48
- Views: 32470
Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 10: Pain - Part 2 (28/07/2017)
Previous Post I think back to her seizure and the show we were watching. I had never noticed until now, but there seems to be a similarity between myself and Tsukushi Makino. If Akemi and I were in that show and I was Tsukushi, then would that mean Akemi would be Sakurako? Well, except for the betr...
- Fri Jul 28, 2017 12:16 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
- Replies: 48
- Views: 32470
Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 10: Pain - Part 1 (28/07/2017)
Again, months between chapters. This time there are two main reasons. One; I got distracted my Steam games >.> , and two I was busy writing out future notes and rewriting what was already written: I have 40+k worth of notes for the upcoming chapters. ---- Chapter 10: Pain *** Ryuunosuke’s PoV *** As...
- Thu Jul 20, 2017 3:59 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Slippery Slope (A Post-Lilly Neutral Ending Fic)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4487
Re: Slippery Slope (A Post-Lilly Neutral Ending Fic)
Well, later on I do imply that those words stung, and that she is trying to prove him wrong about her. Still trying to work out the details of this fic. And the chess games are those he played off screen in Lilly's route, It's a counter of how many times they've won or lost against each other total...
- Tue Jul 04, 2017 12:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 32453
Re: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
Finally, if you're looking for a replacement proofreader, just drop me a PM. All the stories I proofread at the moment are apparently on hiatus :-) Hey now, it's not my fault someone's proofreading has caused a butterfly effect requiring a story rewrite :P QuietlySomething, which is I am enjoying t...
- Sun Jul 02, 2017 2:58 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Akira-te Kid - An Akira Satou Fan Route
- Replies: 35
- Views: 22537
Re: The Akira-te Kid - An Akira Satou Fan Route
Not sure if you can write cursive Kanji... You can. Cursive kanji range from illegible to completely illegible to "possibly legible to people who have a specialist's knowledge of kanji but it's not a sure deal". It's great. Well, yes, but that's not exactly the same as what we understand ...
- Sat Jul 01, 2017 12:59 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
- Replies: 217
- Views: 126106
Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jun 28th, 2017)
It seems Miki's curse has a second part; topics of her get revived a long while later .
Reading through this the only issue I had was as others have stated, and the choices part. I I actually ended up reading the bad end twice even after I thought I I did opposite choice.
Reading through this the only issue I had was as others have stated, and the choices part. I I actually ended up reading the bad end twice even after I thought I I did opposite choice.
- Wed Jun 28, 2017 10:54 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 53069
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4
After having caught up with fics I was part reading, I saw this and read it, took 2 or 3 days. May have been in one of your "Baby Steps " chapters but you misspelt miscellaneous good sir. I would spell it the way you did but on mobile so is a tad harder to refind it. My heart said ouch whe...
- Mon Jun 26, 2017 3:23 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
- Replies: 18
- Views: 8176
Re: One Little Day and A Call to Yamaku
Oddball wrote:A decent enough read for what it was, I guess. I'm not big into medical drama though so I might be the wrong person to judge.
I have some interest, and watch some programs, such as House. M. D. Oh god, imagine House as a doctor at Yamaku.
- Wed Jun 21, 2017 4:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
- Replies: 1197
- Views: 906054
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 5/18)
Somehow I missed the 2nd half of the chapter where Chisato steals Mitsuru's chips . Sure glad the forum has a read and unread feature :P Really well done chapter, again :) I wonder if or when Hisao meets her parents, how'd they react. Also I came across this while trying to find out if Saki IS in th...
- Fri Jun 16, 2017 5:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
- Replies: 315
- Views: 175177
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
And so another arises
A phoenix, from the ashes.
Welcome back Sharp-O. Sometimes struggle with words so I'll say just this; great chapter
A phoenix, from the ashes.
Welcome back Sharp-O. Sometimes struggle with words so I'll say just this; great chapter