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by Bad Apple
Mon Nov 25, 2013 7:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 422229

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 11/20/2013}

I don't know if I flinched , but I replayed Emi's route to write this chapter, and, yeah, I definitely thought "this. This is the moment where my readership turns on Iwanako." Obviously Iwanako has little idea of the gravity of what she said (she didn't even notice Emi's prosthetics,) but...
by Bad Apple
Mon Nov 25, 2013 2:33 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 5015828

Re: Ask!

So a bunch of mostly unrelated questions. I recently noticed the shopkeep of Othello's Antiques wears a white collared shirt and greenish slacks, the same colors used at Yamaku. Was his sprite to be used for something relating to Yamaku at one point, or are the colors a coincidence? Or... was he ori...
by Bad Apple
Fri Nov 22, 2013 10:42 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 5015828

Re: Ask!

And is Shizune already hot for Hisao fairly early in Act 1 (i.e. pre-festival) or is it all about getting him on the Student Council? All the ladies want to ride Hisao like a Harley down a stretch of bad road from day one, except for Rin. Funny, seeing Rin is the only one 'flirting' with the guy fr...
by Bad Apple
Fri Nov 22, 2013 3:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 717796

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/20]

’s a weird feeling, to say the least. Whether it be a simple explanation or a drawn out, detailed study session with the her and Lilly, it keeps coming back; this strange satisfaction with having helped someone learn or figure something out. with her and Lilly “I wouldn’t know anything about accomm...
by Bad Apple
Thu Nov 21, 2013 11:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 36060

Re: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]

NekoDude, I never saw a lick of your writing, but I'll tell you what. You have ambition and you obviously want to create something great. An epic saga. Drama and tragedy and romance and all those powerful emotional experiences, all with simple words. That's wonderful, more people should venture fort...
by Bad Apple
Thu Nov 21, 2013 3:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 422229

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 11/20/2013}

Incidentally in relation to the above post. Seems like another series of coincidences. I could always fix that, I guess. I feel like a phone conversation would be too awkward, after all this time, but I don’t know… Maybe I could send a letter. heh I shouldn’t be living in the past, anyway. It’s onl...
by Bad Apple
Sat Nov 09, 2013 12:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 36060

Re: OC "Neko" - Route [cancelled]

So this is not cancelled per se. Perhaps, to prevent confusion, the subject should be changed to a more accurate term, like "on hiatus"? Didn't read this one, but I can tell you're one ambitious man. I'll read this one when it's done and possibly point out whatever little "the experts...
by Bad Apple
Sat Nov 02, 2013 6:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 717796

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 10/10]

Guess Akira better get used to hearing this every time she and Hisao get shitfaced...

Yeah I've been waiting for an opportune moment to use that one for a while
by Bad Apple
Wed Oct 23, 2013 6:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 422229

When life gives you lemon lube...

Now, if you want an actual spoiler, here is a comprehensive list of the Katawa Shoujo characters Iwanako will definitely not get into a relationship with: Takashi, Taro, Mutou, Nomiya, Jigoro, Sae, the cameo characters, Hanako's psychologist, the guy who phones Meiko in the track meet scene, Hisao'...
by Bad Apple
Tue Oct 22, 2013 6:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 422229

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2

Oh, so I was spot-on about the concussion matter? Excellent. The Royal Trap I'm no VN veteran but I'll take what I can find. I'll check it out. Trap and VN in the same sentence is making me think of another kind of trap however... I'll bet you the nurse is going to cover up the whole thing. In fact ...
by Bad Apple
Mon Oct 21, 2013 11:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 422229

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2

A few things I forgot mentioning. (I was low on time with my previous post.) I apologize in advance for giving you even more text to read through, Leaty. :? Personally I don't see much of a problem with Iwanako's overreaction. Sure, we're among relatively astute peers here, but I don't suppose many ...
by Bad Apple
Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 185492

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 28/09/2013)

How did I forget to comment on this? Well, this warrants a reread. (I would reread this either way but still :)) Ah, nicely done. It did hit home for me, in a way. While it was well done as always, I do agree with the sentiment on the part of Hanako's apparent lack of regret however subtle. The next...
by Bad Apple
Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 422229

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2

Ah! I was wondering where this went. I figured a spell of writer's block was to blame, nothing more. Wow, this has taken a Doomisher turn than I expected all things considered. I like it. You weren't kidding either. That was a long chapter to plow through. But I'm a slow reader, so take that with a ...
by Bad Apple
Fri Oct 18, 2013 6:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route *Updated 8/7/14*
Replies: 53
Views: 27775

Re: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route

crackfic* *pun not intended In short, it encroaches on crackfic >crackfic Don't you mean methfic? 8) ... I'll grab my coat... And assuming a fanfic was not written by a teenage fangirl to get her naughty bits going, and it's an outlandish crackfic like this, I always perceive it to be comedic and k...
by Bad Apple
Thu Oct 17, 2013 11:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route *Updated 8/7/14*
Replies: 53
Views: 27775

Re: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route

Basically I agree with everything he said, and 600.000$ for four months of hospital stay (that would be 5.000$ PER DAY) is frankly ridiculous for any country. Protip: An uninsured, one-hour hospital visit in the U.S. for a minor injury can run you over $3,000, excluding tax, depending on the state,...