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Realistically, some would stay in touch, others would fall apart. Unless you apply some Kosher-dust. Assuming that Hisao and Hanako end up together... Lillyxemi Shizunexmisha Kenji dies in a sewer somewhere Rin, after three straight years meditation, finds a way to impregnate herself without male in...

Dooming, you have a terrible habit of making really dark, sad, and brilliant stories. This was a tearjerker, and I didn't have to punch a bear to regain my manhood, because I would loose it one hundred times so long as you keep writing.
Have a nice day,
*salutes*
And God bless

KS did affect me. Since playing, I've started writing. Besides that, I also intend to learn ASL, because Shizunes route taught me that the people who speak the least have the best stuff to say.

Oh and also I look at people more

Damn...
Great chapter, but...
Damn....

Hmm... Are you going to turn this into an OC thing? If so, the character seems to fit the bill. Besides the formatting issue that may make it harder for the audience to read, the disability is belivable, but the character so far is a mannequin bad-um tish , very robotic in his acceptance of a dead ...

moar pls. This seems like a great opportunity. *Punches self in stomach for not thinking of it earlier* I honestly want to see where you go with it, and your blind girl seems... eccentric, but not Kenji i.e. paranoid, sexist, smells like garlic etc. Dont be afraid to take Iwanko down different paths...

Hmm... Are you going to turn this into an OC thing? If so, the character seems to fit the bill. Besides the formatting issue that may make it harder for the audience to read, the disability is belivable, but the character so far is a mannequin bad-um tish , very robotic in his acceptance of a dead d...

Hmm... So far, I like it. Your character seems stuck with a rather unique disability/deformity, and him being from England is a nice change of pace. You do make me wonder who he's going after though.

Anyway, carry on.

Well, you all make good points. I'm not the best at writing, but ill be damned if its going to stop me. I wont make any excuses, but I do need to improve, with the tense switching, the misspelling, and other things. I couldn't think of anything to make Mr. Reed stand out from Mr. Nakai this early in...

Hi. Im fairly new at this whole writing thing, but I spent the better part of a few months developing this fanfic, so I figured I would post the first chapter. I am a little nervous, but dont hesitate to tell me how I can improve my writing. =========================================================...

I really don't have anything, just some nearsightedness, but one of my classmates (who could have a great rap name) is blind in his left eye. He's cool about it though

Okay, I really loved this story. You made the magic seem... Realistic, if that makes sense. And giving Misha cancer was brilliant (but sad). The story seemed more down to earth than the other fanfics that give the crew superpowers. Anyway, good job. Carry on *sits down in chair* *starts reading book...

When you start to learn sign language just so you can beat a deaf person at risk

Congrats, you bear witness to my first post. I like your character, as well the concept. I've seen another OCXLilly, but I don't think it's been updated in a while.

Anyway, keep up the good work solider!