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Consider it a compliment. I normally don't get that in-depth with fanfics here because there are more egregious errors to be dealt with or there are simply too many of them. ...And five dozen fanfic authors looked over their shoulder, shuffled their feet, then laughed nervously. Here, it's strange ...

Out of curiosity, did you find this part immensely frustrating to write? Because that was basically my experience in Mean Time to Breakdown when I first tried to tackle "Enter Stage Left." The drudgery of borrowing so liberally from the source text was seriously depressing me and utterly r...

Ah, I did wonder about that. I don't know who Osaka is, but I like what you did with Momomi. Basically an utter space cadet. Not in the Rin sense, but in the "ingenue with a massive attention deficit disorder" sense. Kusuri was going to mirror Kenji's suspicion of Hisao's parents by seein...

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This thread should be getting more comments than those that merely consist of a post promising a fic to be written in the future... I'll make comments on what you've posted since I last said anything here. Intermezzo: First of all, let me say nooooooooo not the Yuuko/Kenji ship. http://i.imgur.com/y...

All the points Mirage makes are excellent. Better nitpicking than I'd be capable of without dedicating the better part of a day. I don't often comment on other people's fics, because I can be uncomfortably merciless, but I like what you have so far enough that I'd feel comfortable recommending it to...

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(Was there any reason this scene needed to be split up into two posts? Yeah, I don't think so either.)

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This is my favorite Miki story so far. I was hoping I'd see it continued.

I look forward to the next installment.

Oh wow, this thread. I go away to brainstorm for a bit and then suddenly: whatthefuckamireading.jpg Leaty, I give you serious props for playing Devil's advocate and the amount of attention you have to detail, but honestly the intent behind half of what you said has completely gone over my head. I'm...