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Ugh. I feel like every one of these moments makes me feel more certain that i wont make it. That hopes were silly for me to have. That I'm just stuck this way with no hope of being seen as anything but a big ugly hulking thing. Having an asterisk next to what I am is already hard. Having my appearan...

This thread has always been connected somewhat tenuously to the general thrust of the KS forums, but it has been tolerated so far. The latest influx of squabbling, aggravated by the equivalent of a shouting match where each side tries to beat the other through volume rather than debate, concerns to...

Mirage_GSM wrote:My impression of the prologue:
MC named the same as the poster - check.
American youth going to a school in Japan for flimsy reasons - check.

Conclusion: Another self-insert Mary Sue story.

My, how I love Munchenhausen's story. =p

It covers these wonderfully.

Oh... oh ouch.

Anyway, since we've run out of quality replies I'll add some further reading, then be off "I couldn't actually come up with a real reply to someone who doesn't buy into manipulative fear, insecurity, and indignation, so I'll just be dismissive" My, if you can't support it against real dis...

forgetmenot wrote:

LilyKitsune wrote:There was a story about someone with amnesia. Kagami, I believe. Not sure how you feel about that.

Indeed, there is, because I write it. However...

You mean "wrote"

Because it has been so long since the last post >:(

There was a story about someone with amnesia. Kagami, I believe. Not sure how you feel about that.

The ideal first date is one where there's mutual attraction and connection. I don't care about the venue or activity as long as there's those two things. That about sums it up. I think it covers things like it not being at a rave or some other loud place, as I certainly wouldn't connect with someon...

Just a note, Lilly Satou has two Ls together. They are both common names (mine has one L!) But hers is the "double L" kind.

Munchenhausen wrote:

LilyKitsune wrote:I dont do well with vague subjects online. =/
I've no idea who any of you are talking to or about.

It's best to just pull your head down and ignore it all

I don't wanna.

I dont do well with vague subjects online. =/

I've no idea who any of you are talking to or about.

Hello again, apologies for not responsing sooner. I'm glad there's been so many replies, it shows this is an important topic. I don't argue, I'm here to make a point. That doesn't mean I'm not ready to debate, but you can't expect me to answer posts that include insults or begin with an interjectio...

Hm. Theres a few issues with wordiness and runon sentences that hurt the flow of the story, hurting buildup. It's nice that you're going for adding more description, but not stuffing it in one giant sentence is the next level. Also, take a look at your usage of "had" in your writing, for t...

Well, the date I was so excited about was called off. Officially, now. For a few days, he just wasnt responding. I guess the final explanation he gave yesterday made some sense, and I guess I can cling to that as the truth as it was out of my control and rather innocuous. I still feel somewhere insi...

AntonSlavik020 wrote:Yeah, I wasn't big on the neck kissing either. Felt too forward.

Glad someone else felt so.