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That sound you hear is me slapping my forehead.

That "movie adaption" wouldn't happen to be Life of Pi? I didn't really have any specific book/movie in mind. Oh, also... don't know if you want concrit or editing. There's a few typo's I'd point out, but for the most part the grammar was well done. Poor grammar tends to ruin stories for me because...

- Hisao can have any attacks any minutes. Hanako can commit suicide any minute (which is why she goes to therapy every week). Rika Katayama can die any minute. Saki Enomoto has a case so fatally dangerous she should not go to school in the first place. That's not what the story says. The truckload ...

But probably pretty interesting for some of us on the forum.

- Dude every hospital doctors and nurses do some rounds to check on students. Isnt Yamaku a hospital already? No it isn't. It's a boarding school with a on-site nursing staff. It's main purpose is teaching students how to adapt and cope with their condition properly and come out as productive membe...

That only seemed to happen when she hit the emotional equivalent of rock bottom. She was in the middle of her birthday depression, feeling even worse about herself than usual and then Hisao came in and started telling her how he just got off the phone with Lilly talking and worrying about her. That ...

There's nothing logical about phobias and the kind of anxieties Hanako has to begin with. Logically Hanako has no reason to hate herself, but low self-esteem is hardly ever addressed by a simple "logically you're not a bad person". Hanako was treated like a sub-human for a significant part of her li...

Hisao notes during the party that the wine had the tendency to suddenly hit Hanako at once, meaning it'd be easy to go too far too quickly. Yes, Hanako becomes another person with the right amount of alcohol, but alcohol doesn't merely remove inhibitions, but it also can alter behavior. Hisao alread...

At the very least, Hanako should have tried to secure some alcohol for herself and Hisao. She deserved better for her first time. Yes, because Hanako is totally not the kind of girl who might think thoughts like "He only wanted me because he had alcohol." afterwards. At least now she had the knowle...

Come to think about it, maybe Hisao should have went with the "f" instead of the "t". Very likely, after Hanako wakes up, she goes "Hey, a guy actually took advantage of me. I am wanted!" Sure beats the unenjoyable one they had later. That certainly would have solved the "Did Hisao rape Hanako"-deb...

If it's a music cue list you need, here's one I personally suggest. I don't think I'd put it into the story though since it might distract from those who just want to read.

I'm taking this one down ahead of schedule. It's no longer necessary anyway.

Lilly didn't look completely sober herself either. Heck, that wine was probably hers to begin with.

But what frustrated me the most about Lily is her overly submissive attitude! In school, she was so formal and her voice was dominant. But she cannot even face her parents. She left according to their will without even the smallest protest. If that is your definition of believable then I can bet yo...

I don't think those unanswered questions were all that unanswered, btw. The answer to many of them was implied. 1. Is it true that Yuko and Kenji used to have a relationship? It's implied, but never stated outright. The devs could have stated it definitely, but it's obvious they chose not to. Someti...

Of course, since he's not allowed to extract anything, he won't be able to use the existing backgrounds, character sprites or music. (meaning every asset would have to be created from scratch) That's a major obstacle if you're only a programmer and not also head of a dedicated art team.