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by Helbereth
Wed Aug 15, 2012 7:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596645

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

Gee, if 75k is enough for a novel... Good God, does that mean I'm writing book 2 in my OC story? (I breached 140,000 words thus far) I don't think word count is a viable indicator of the validity of a story's narrative depth. It's a publishing term more than a literary one, and only gets brought up ...
by Helbereth
Wed Aug 15, 2012 7:39 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Music and Katawa Shoujo
Replies: 7
Views: 2420

Re: Music and Katawa Shoujo

[snip]I've tried to listen to music whilst reading before, and I always tend to focus more on the music I'm hearing than the writing itself, especially if the song has lyrics. I don't know if that's a common thing or what, but Katawa Shoujo's music didn't grab my attention like that, I'm not sure i...
by Helbereth
Wed Aug 15, 2012 3:12 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Music and Katawa Shoujo
Replies: 7
Views: 2420

Re: Music and Katawa Shoujo

My only gripe about the KS music is many of the tracks don't loop well. They were never designed to, though (I don't think so, anyway), so I don't hold that against them. Otherwise, the music in KS is a large part of setting the mood, and you're missing a lot if you listen to something else over the...
by Helbereth
Wed Aug 15, 2012 1:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148707

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 8/14

Hoitash wrote:
Helbereth wrote: ...and I'm particular about whom I trust to shove an object in my ear...
...You know, I used to make "that's what she said" jokes, but then I took an arrow to the knee.

/Smokebomb.
Your wielding of internet memes is commendable.
by Helbereth
Wed Aug 15, 2012 1:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/10

That way y'all will have something to do on hump day, and it won't interrupt anyone's Friday plans. Odd... "y'all" is not picked up by my browser spell-check, even though I'm fairly certain it's not a proper contraction. Oh god, your slowly becoming me! Next you'll start using smileys after every l...
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 14, 2012 9:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148707

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 8/14

Yeah, I get occaisonal migraines, and they suck. Plus for the past five days I've been suffering dental related pain, and one of the effects is a twinge in my right temple. Fun! I think mine is ear-related. Like there's a blockage in the sinus around the ear, and it's causing swelling, pain and a d...
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 14, 2012 9:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/10

Interesting avatar change. Appropriate though. As I finish other concept art, I'll probably use those, too. Liked the way Aiko came out, really. Probably should have ported it into Photoshop to do the coloring, though - Flash is kinda bad at coloring. Figure I'll toss an update here; I'll be postin...
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 14, 2012 8:38 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482607

Re: Ask!

I've heard a lot complain that Rin in Act 1 seems quite different from Rin in the rest of her acts, although I've noticed this to some extent with most of the characters. Considering you're the one who wrote Rin's path, is there a particular reason for this? Just curious, I'm not one of the people ...
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 14, 2012 8:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148707

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 8/14

Again, the walls were higher and wider then seemed defensibly sound or structurally economic for hollowing out a hill. Splat. He tossed the grenade and pulled out his pistol and waited. This may be personal preference, but that first 'and' should be a comma instead. Once the smoke started to pore o...
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:27 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 429013

Re: How to sleep after Lilly's arc?

Y'all need some
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by Helbereth
Tue Aug 14, 2012 9:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596645

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

But in any event I think what Suzu needs is appointments with a sleep specialist and a grief counselor. Given the steps her parents have taken so far to help her out I'm surprised this hasn't happened yet. Actually, I think the problem is that she refuses to tell anyone it's even bothering her. Gra...
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 14, 2012 4:40 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Is There Any Character That You Really Hate Seeing?
Replies: 119
Views: 28561

Re: Is There Any Character That You Really Hate Seeing?

Antique Shop Keeper.

We got a sprite for him? Really?
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 13, 2012 10:46 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4863
Views: 1035527

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Hmm, well, after a battery of blood tests, a cat scan and a lot of poking and prodding, they didn't find anything wrong. Whatever it was, it was very painful, enough to warrant the trip, but seems to have been short-lived. I'm relieved, but still perplexed. She's had 'belly issues' for years, so I s...
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:13 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482607

Re: Ask!

cpl_crud wrote:Misha's path is in the box.
I can't help thinking there's a subtle innuendo there.
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 13, 2012 6:29 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: what's with the fried shrimp?
Replies: 21
Views: 7907

Re: what's with the fried shrimp?

Okay, am I to assume you're talking about playing the game with censorship turned on? Having not done so -never saw the need- I can't speak from experience, but, reading about some of the items used to block the view, it seems to me there's a bit of verbal innuendo going on and I approve. A photo of...