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I'd side with the camp assuming her job at 19 was more clerical than courtroom. Nepotism on her father's behalf could have placed her working a secretarial position while she attended University locally, and, by the time of the story, she could have easily attained a law degree and been practicing f...

You are SO going to hate me when you read the PM I sent...

*insert typical story-praising sentence here*

I don't think Miki screwed up there -- she was just getting lunch, which is hardly a sign of idiocy. Bad timing is really all that happened there, but it contributed to the proceedings regardless of her intent. Had she not chosen that moment to go grab another whatever, she may have been close enou...

You can excuse his lack of explanation by remembering he's pretty much flying into a white-hot-rage, and his mouth is moving ahead of his brain by that point. Hisao really doesn't help the situation, but, then again, he has no idea why Lezard is reacting so forcefully. It's a giant miscommunication,...

There's one thing that you have to remember when it comes to Lezard, he also "Likes" Suzu, which is what drives him to resent Hisao. I gathered that from the early chapters. It just doesn't seem like it is enough or a good reason (even for a high-schooler) to metaphorically swing a brick at Suzu's ...

I hate you. I thought I would always hate OC fan fictions and then you come along and knock me off my high throne. I don't even know how you did it. Your story doesn't have mind-blowing writing with astonishing plot twists in every chapter. Your writing also isn't so horrific that it makes me want ...

Grinning through the cigar held between his teeth, Teddy leveled his shotgun and grunted, "God dammit, Grant!" He really hated being called "Teddy." TR was fine, though. I am a historian focusing on Reconstruction and the Progressive Era, you know. Well, my studies of History didn't extend past my ...

OtakuNinja wrote:WHAT THE HELL DOES "DANCE ORIENTATION" MEAN?!?!?!

Out of context, I assume it's the direction one is supposed to face while dancing.

True, although if I followed that motto I'd be writing stories about Theodore Roosevelt and Ulysses S. Grant fighting zombies and werewolves. ... Grinning through the cigar held between his teeth, Teddy leveled his shotgun and grunted, "God dammit, Grant!" Ulysses stepped to the side, ducking the b...

It's a bridge between the end of the Amaya/Tadao altercation and the trip. I could have glazed it over with a few paragraphs, but there were a few things I wanted to close down, and a few others I wanted to open up - I also wanted to live in Aiko's head while she's kept out of the loop. She starts ...

After I finished Rin's and Emi's path. I realized that they're a point which me and Rin. and surprisingly, my crush and Emi have in common. It is that we have no "friend". I am kind of loner. So I often be the last who have a group in any group work, and I feel like I am only one who ever worked wi...

Look at me, arguing with the author... Welcome to my world :3 Also, I have no comment on the chapters yet again. Looking forward to what happens to what happens at the beach . Good guess, but I'll remind you the world has many places that could fit the descriptions I've hinted around. As young Adam...

Hoitash wrote:

Helbereth wrote:
They say, "write what you know," right?

True, although if I followed that motto I'd be writing stories about Theodore Roosevelt and Ulysses S. Grant fighting zombies and werewolves.

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Or Abraham Lincoln fighting vampires?

Hoitash wrote:

Helbereth wrote:
It did in my head, if that counts.

You're the writer, so it works for me

It's supposed to feel like a cross-over, so I think it's perfectly natural. Though, I plan to stick to crossing it with video game worlds, and not TV shows or whatnot.

They say, "write what you know," right?

Quite an enjoyable chapter. Felt a bit like a filler, but it also tied up some loose ends and established the party for the trip. Definitely ready for the next chapter. It's a bridge between the end of the Amaya/Tadao altercation and the trip. I could have glazed it over with a few paragraphs, but ...