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by Helbereth
Mon Aug 20, 2012 7:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 34054

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 Complete 8/20/12) (For real this ti

I never asked for mime.
Nobody ever asks for a mime.

About half the time, I have no idea who's talking during your dialogue... reading it over several times helps, but a little bit of indication as to who the hell is talking would be adviseable.
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 20, 2012 2:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Body proportions
Replies: 50
Views: 14592

Re: Body proportions

Misha only 85/58/84 ? that's gotta be wrong for sure Actually, not really. It does mean her waist is thicker than the ideal - if only marginally. Her baby bottles are smaller than Shizune's as well, so her upper measurement is more chest than breast. Hip measurements can vary greatly depending on b...
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 20, 2012 1:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 66474

Re: Freaks and Friends

Mirage_GSM wrote:Where have you been living in the past 5-10 years?
If you recall, I literally have not been writing since right around 1998 - shortly after graduation from High School.
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 20, 2012 12:19 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 429016

Re: What's so bad About the Feels?

I've seen people responding to people with the feels with ways to get rid of them. My question is why? Why does everyone act like they're a bad thing? Isn't it a wonderful emotional experience? My reaction to emotional experiences is to try and prolong them, and I know I can't be the only one who t...
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 20, 2012 12:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 66474

Re: Freaks and Friends

Wait they make an algorithm that automatically adjusts misspelled words as you're writing? Whose idiot idea was that? Technology is retarded sometimes.
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 20, 2012 4:11 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 429016

Re: Post-KS Depression

Keneshiro wrote:well holy crap, I contributed to peace on an argument. I brought balance to the Force, I am LUKE SKYWALKER!!!!
You also kissed your sister, then?
by Helbereth
Sun Aug 19, 2012 9:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 66474

Re: Freaks and Friends

I like the flow of your story, but Mirage didn't even touch on how many little little mistakes there are throughout. Just clerical stuff, mostly; misuse of 'you're', misplaced periods, superfluous apostrophes, a few confused sentences and the like. A fine-toothed comb and a few hours spent editing c...
by Helbereth
Sun Aug 19, 2012 8:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: In Kenji's Eyes
Replies: 12
Views: 3772

Re: In Kenji's Eyes

It was Miki, duh.
by Helbereth
Sun Aug 19, 2012 10:42 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 429016

Re: Post-KS Depression

~snip~ which the focus group unerringly enjoyed; saying it made them feel safe and informed while remaining emotionally distant - which is the goal of any scientific term, I suppose. Focus group...... :shock: As for the image, you're free to wield it however you may; it's the result of a half-hour ...
by Helbereth
Sun Aug 19, 2012 10:28 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 429016

Re: Post-KS Depression

PKSDD (Post-Katawa-Shoujo-Depression-Disorder) is a common affliction among its readers. feels-b-gone image On a completely unrelated note, Helbereth that is an extremely good photo Also, I like your Acronym and hope someday to have some opportunity to use both of them. If you don't mind of course....
by Helbereth
Sun Aug 19, 2012 12:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/15

You first steal my throne and then mock me? I would normally insult your intelligence and then rant on about how I would trash your $4000 "stool", but I'm feeling good today and will spare you of my wrath. Well, thank you for your tolerance. If I've shattered your world view, I do apologize; I didn...
by Helbereth
Sat Aug 18, 2012 6:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148707

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 8/18 Update

I consider someone writing "so-and-so said adverb" to be extremely lazy writing. There are certainly ways to do it wrong, or simply misuse the form. If you're just sticking it on the end (or the beginning) to have it there for grammatical purposes and not describing anything, then your story will j...
by Helbereth
Sat Aug 18, 2012 3:16 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: So, I just played Katawa Crash...
Replies: 35
Views: 8575

Re: So, I just played Katawa Crash...

Just gonna leave these two pennies out on the sidewalk here: The problem with racism is the immediate implication that you're a racist even if all you're doing is making derogatory jokes; which are harmless unless there's malicious intent behind them. Your poor reaction, taking offense to something ...
by Helbereth
Sat Aug 18, 2012 2:59 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 429016

Re: Post-KS Depression

PKSDD (Post-Katawa-Shoujo-Depression-Disorder) is a common affliction among its readers. Symptoms include reassessing your own life path, looking up old friends, examining past relationships, reconsidering your familial ties, taking up physical activity, reconnecting with old hobbies, reduced time s...
by Helbereth
Sat Aug 18, 2012 2:45 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Least favorite girl?
Replies: 78
Views: 21588

Re: Least favorite girl?

Emi. For so many reasons, I would feel remiss to try listing them; fearing it would be an incomplete collection. That doesn't stop me from being awed by her character, though. Her being something so antagonistic to me is an endless source of intrigue, such that I've even delved into writing fan-fict...