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by Helbereth
Thu Aug 23, 2012 7:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148707

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 8/21

Hey I got bored and decided to make some fan art. It bloomed into a full-blown book cover.

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by Helbereth
Thu Aug 23, 2012 7:15 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Fan Art Probably The Best
Replies: 14
Views: 6779

Re: Fan Art Probably The Best

Zezin wrote:I wish I had that kind of skill...
Wish in one hand, shit in the other...

There's more to that saying, but I'll just stop there.
by Helbereth
Thu Aug 23, 2012 6:22 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Did Akira even get a degree for that corporate job?
Replies: 36
Views: 9136

Re: Did Akira even get a degree for that corporate job?

Oh, Healthy Adolescent Sex Drive. Took me about 20 seconds. I figured it was some kind of syndrome. It is, in a way. If coupled with stupidity, symptoms may include unwanted pregnancies. Fortunately Lilly was not stupid and was on the pill. Hisao on the other hand... Prophylactics never even get me...
by Helbereth
Thu Aug 23, 2012 1:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/22

Well holy pants. I finally got through all this. You guys are making me feel bad, writing fan fiction like this. Not only is it better quality, but larger in quantity as well. I really like reading this. Aiko is a cool character, and her refusal to submit to dirty thoughts amuses me to no end. I li...
by Helbereth
Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS: Bloodline (Act 2: Chapter Three 2/11)
Replies: 91
Views: 34054

Re: KS: Bloodline (Act 1 Complete 8/20/12) (For real this ti

Ascended Flutist wrote: I am a grammar nazi in two languages. Fear me.
Spread the love, then!
by Helbereth
Wed Aug 22, 2012 1:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/22

Mirage_GSM wrote:
“I meant what you knew.”
Intentional?
Yes.

Colloquialism. Decided I wanted to use it, regardless of the relative difference in continental location.
by Helbereth
Wed Aug 22, 2012 1:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Chapter 19 - Blindfolded (part 2)

Previous Chapter | Part 1 | Next Chapter _________________________________________________________________ Shaking my head and shrugging, I look back over at Hisao and close my eyes to let the silly feeling pass. Opening them again, I feel like thanking Hisao for having invited them, but I think he...
by Helbereth
Wed Aug 22, 2012 1:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Chapter 19 - Blindfolded (part 1)

It's Wednesday (as of 1 hour and 19 minutes ago), so I'm posting the new chapter. I'm not going to say much else here. Blarg. Previous Chapter | Part 2 | Next Chapter _________________________________________________ Chapter 19 - Blindfolded Unfortunately, my subconscious is much less confident in ...
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 21, 2012 11:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148707

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 8/21

This is a confusing sentence. The reason for their retreat should be mentioned first, and there's some confusion about who's actually running. Yeah, that line's been bugging me for days. Thanks for the new perspective :) Haven't had time 'til now to read this over. That was, surprisingly, the only ...
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148707

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 8/21

The men in the courtyard that could ran for safety from the descending copter, and slowly it came into view. This is a confusing sentence. The reason for their retreat should be mentioned first, and there's some confusion about who's actually running. As the helicopter descended into view, the rema...
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 21, 2012 8:30 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Did Akira even get a degree for that corporate job?
Replies: 36
Views: 9136

Re: Did Akira even get a degree for that corporate job?

Guest Poster wrote:a rather strict Catholic all-girls school
Mmhmm...
Guest Poster wrote:she got confessions all the time.
Right... wait, what?

:lol:
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 21, 2012 5:01 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Body proportions
Replies: 50
Views: 14592

Re: Body proportions

It's because Hisao's a shallow jerk. He ignores all the other girls with less than perfect proportions, hence the lack of interest in Miki, Suzu, Rika, etc. Or maybe they just weren't interested in him. In almost all the cases, it's the girl that starts talking with him first (Hanako being the exce...
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 21, 2012 4:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 8/15

YOU FUCKER. I just killed a morning trying to recover from an awesomely devastating bad end when you throw out a friggin' brain disease at me. As if all these damned shoujos needed more Katawa-ing, you install another hard limiter in a story where many characters' next days might be the last. Grrr....
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 21, 2012 2:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 66474

Re: Freaks and Friends

Mirage_GSM wrote: Now that took some time for someone to notice...
The word you're looking for is 'mention'.

And yeah, Tana's disability isn't mental retardarion or anything. It's similar in scope to LeLoush's aphasia. All it does is delay her reactions, not prevent them.
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 20, 2012 8:46 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: 5-year reunion (Lilly's path). Group shot.
Replies: 14
Views: 8048

Re: 5-year reunion (Lilly's path). Group shot.

It looks like they're posing for a photo. Who's behind the camera? Hideaki? I hadn't really thought of it, but I'd imagine it's unlikely to be Yuuko as she'd probably have moved on by then, and Akira probably wouldn't be able to get away from work, so Hideaki seems plausible. For some odd reason, t...