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BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:By the way, I know where Aiko gets her dirty-mindedness from, now.

My secret is out!

*smoke bomb*

*scurries away*

BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:

Banda wrote: [insert .gif of black woman bobbing her head here.]

Certainly.

[Gif]

That isn't quite the head-bobbing image I had in mind upon reading the reply.

Perhaps I just have a dirty mind, though; carry on!

Miki being Suzu's real-life super-hero.

How appropriate.

I really like this story; I think I've mentioned that. This time, I decided to read with a more critical eye and point out some of the incongruities and flaws that mar an otherwise excellent read. urple t-shirt Starting small, this looks like a minor typographical error. Purple, I assume? There's no...

Thanks for the notes, though. Anything you would change about it? I want to strangle whoever is teaching people to place dialogue completely separate from the prose, floating on a line by itself with no direction, description or adverbs. That and some other grammar blunders, but it's otherwise fine...

Kind of short, but sweet and descriptive. It feels like there needs to be more to this, though; it doesn't seem like a complete story, rather only part of a longer tale.

Welcome back, glad you were able to fend off that zombie horde in time to save the coffee supply :) I never really left, I've just been holed up behind a dam of confusion and doubt. Perhaps that could be an allegory of a zombie apocalypse, though. Nothing good ever comes from creepy forests with fo...

Legit spoiler-type question: does she bat for the other team? Honestly, I haven't thought about that much. The possibility is there, and it might be an interesting sub-plot with the developing friendship concerning Yoko, and her mutual affection with Kenta, but whether I'll explore it thoroughly wi...

What does she need energy drinks for if her problem is not being able to sleep? Suzu is trying to stay awake to avoid dreaming - avoid nightmares. Hence the energy drinks. Hisao got the energy drinks so he could stay up to try and help her get to sleep, when he thought that was the problem. It's a ...

Total Destruction wrote:Looking back at the past three (!) months of following this, I've arrived at the weirdest Goddamned conclusion about something totally ancillary, but good nonetheless. Naoko's fucking adorable. Well done.

I'm curious what makes you say that; specifically, why Naoko?

It seems I often find myself writing another part for this right after finishing a chapter in Tomorrow's Doom; I'm not sure why. Finally back on the ground, things are about to swing upward. Previous | Next _____________________________________________ The Kenji Files: Dark Garden Part 5 Hovering S...

“A competitive game we can all participate in,” Misha replies, which sounds rehearsed. She even holds up a finger as she finishes the thought, “volleyball.” All except for Hisao... Hmm, seems he's playing anyway without regard for potentially lethal consequences. Not sure what "spiking" is, but vol...

This is the first thing you've written that I thoroughly enjoyed, Banda.

First up; I loved reading the volleyball scene. Many fond memories of volleyball for me; mostly being roped into it in highschool and discovering I had a talent for it. Yeah, I haven't played in about 15 years and I actually didn't refresh my memory with Google or a video search. It was one of the ...

Some tips on how to think when approaching fan-fiction. Describe things: Writing fan-fiction is not an excuse for failing to describe things, especially characters. You may be tempted to rely on your audience to know what the characters look like, sound like, or act like, but don't be complacent. Le...