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Y'know, it's weird, but I'm actually enjoying rereading the later chapters - the stuff with the wolf. Perhaps because it's been a few weeks, but it's almost like reading it the first time. I've found that, as a writer, if you're happy with what you wrote, you can generally reread it in a enjoyable,...

Y'know, it's weird, but I'm actually enjoying rereading the later chapters - the stuff with the wolf. Perhaps because it's been a few weeks, but it's almost like reading it the first time.

Paintbrush makes for a jagged mess of a medium, but I think i got the point across.

Dost mine eyes deceive me? Doomish writing something that has a very grimdark potential, and yet he's choosing to side with optimism? Is this still Earth? Are we in another reality? Can I get a dark matter sandwich here? Do stupid people exist?

The possibilities are endless!

Hmm, interesting title ideas. As long as I can use an exclamation point and give people an idea of what they're expecting, I'm willing to try it :) You drop a lot of original characters into the first chapter and that took a while to get used to but other than that it's a good story so far. Yeah, I...

Xanatos wrote:

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Not my fault it's true.

To you.

It's completely subjective what is and isn't a bad concept for a story; the only way to know if it won't work out is to write it. This exactly. I think the things you find wrong with cross-over fiction are solved through quality writing. If you do so properly, assume nothing, and know the source ma...

Yellow 13 wrote:3deep5u

This, basically.

"Went for" is a little strong. I "ended up with" Rin, despite how unusual that sounds. When I started out, I really didn't pay too much attention to the choices; merely selecting whichever option I think I would have gone with. Somehow that led me down the path toward a day spent lounging against a ...

For the foreseeable future, because of commitments I've made to writing related fan-fiction, I'll probably be using it as reference rather than personal enjoyment. Having not actually noticed the game was released until mid-June, the anniversary of my original play-through won't come up until then. ...

Wait... I find it odd that "you are not known for your subtlety" is not a Kenji trait and "people misunderstand you often" is not a Rin trait; I'd have considered Kenji to be the gold medalist for NOT SUBTLE and Rin a Spanish hourglass for lost cheese on Tuesdays. Okay, setting aside that most of th...

Mirage_GSM wrote:

...and then sleep becomes me.

So an anthropomorphic personification of Sleep takes on Suzu's identity? We're getting really surreal here...

At least it wasn't 'death becomes me'.

I just scared myself...

I'd read it, but I already did like eight times...

I'll reserve comments since... well.. I know too much.

Perhaos it's a little late, but I wanted to add my final thoughts, as well as the image I conjured as a result of the ending:

For some reason I was picturing her Dad as a bald man Well, I never described him at all, so that's only natural, I guess. Why bald, though? No idea. He's gotta be old-ish I guess, and old blokes tend to be bald or balding. Also most of the male members of my family are bald. Might have something t...