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by Helbereth
Sun Oct 28, 2012 7:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Akira(?!)- Terror in the Night! Conclusion Update!
Replies: 57
Views: 20685

Re: Hisao and Akira(?!)- Terror in the Night! 10/20 Update

You should change the 'updated' date to the 27th.
by Helbereth
Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:13 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2405
Views: 538933

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

Megumeru wrote:I just realize this now-passive habit of mine...

When you click the quote of your favorite character each time you visit KS's main page before jumping into the forums.
There's a main page?
by Helbereth
Fri Oct 26, 2012 6:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 10/25

Hoitash wrote:Whoo, finally caught up.

Sorry for being so late to the party; shoulda known if you wrote it, I'd like it :)

Great work as usual, keep it up, hold the line, etc, etc.
To quote Kenta quoting Bruce Willis; "Welcome to the party, pal!"
by Helbereth
Fri Oct 26, 2012 2:55 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482606

Re: Ask!

If you want to write convincing female characters, make a convincing character and use female pronouns when describing her. It's like MAGIC. From As Good As It Gets (1997) : Receptionist: How do you write women so well? Melvin Udall: I think of a man, and I take away reason and accountability. I do...
by Helbereth
Fri Oct 26, 2012 10:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596645

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 10/13)

Do I detect a reference to Tomorrow's Doom? Unfortunately not. As much as I wish I did, I simply don't have the time to add another massive story to my list of ones to keep up on. Any similarities between this story and Helbereth's are purely accidental. I don't think a single word used in context ...
by Helbereth
Fri Oct 26, 2012 9:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Akira(?!)- Terror in the Night! Conclusion Update!
Replies: 57
Views: 20685

Re: Hisao and Akira(?!)- Terror in the Night! 10/20 Update

Hoitash wrote:So no pressure, right :wink:
We're screwed!
by Helbereth
Fri Oct 26, 2012 9:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 10/25

it didn't drag on or anything, but it lasted too long... know what I mean? Yeah, I sort of regret planning so much stuff to happen over the vacation, but I understood it would get long through here from early in writing. Even before the final number of attendees rose to 9 (It was 6 when I outlined ...
by Helbereth
Thu Oct 25, 2012 9:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Chapter 24 - Shenanigans

Lo and behold, a new chapter! Doth mine eyes deceive me? Okay, enough of that. Well, I'll admit, I've had some writers block over the past month. More like writer's fatigue, really. I have endless ideas and an outline to reference, but I haven't had the ambition to sit down and write at much more t...
by Helbereth
Thu Oct 25, 2012 8:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 32
Views: 9160

Re: Girl Interpreted [Featuring... Girl!] [Updated 10/22]

It's kind of an easy way out when looking to generate feels It's no more of a hook than than missing limbs or narcolepsy. Generating feels depends on the quality of the writing. Getting the reader to empathize with their plight rather than merely sympathize with their disability/disease. We have to...
by Helbereth
Tue Oct 23, 2012 10:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 32
Views: 9160

Re: Girl Interpreted [Featuring... Girl!] [Updated 10/22]

Doomish wrote:
[Glorious art of Girl by DanjaDoom]
[Glorious art of Girl by Helbereth]
I love you both aaaaaa this is the best thing, everything is the best thing!
SwaggerVest.jpg
This is not my art.
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by Helbereth
Tue Oct 23, 2012 10:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Akira(?!)- Terror in the Night! Conclusion Update!
Replies: 57
Views: 20685

Re: Hisao and Akira(?!)- Terror in the Night! 10/20 Update

Wow, that is totally opposite of how I edit. I read it first for my own pleasure and then pick it apart. I approach it like I'm the one writing it, except it's already written out. I find if I read it first, I'm less likely to notice issues. He asked me to be brutal with it, too, and it's harder to...
by Helbereth
Tue Oct 23, 2012 8:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 32
Views: 9160

Re: Girl Interpreted [Featuring... Girl!] [Updated 10/22]

That is one hell of a justification! Bravo. ...I still want there to be more art of Girl. At least then I'd have things to post in the forsaken Katawa Shoujo General threads besides ' that feel when there will never be any more art of Girl ' when I post a story about her. Over 75 hours in MS Paint ...
by Helbereth
Tue Oct 23, 2012 5:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 32
Views: 9160

Re: Girl Interpreted [Featuring... Girl!] [Updated 10/22]

That is one hell of a justification! Bravo. ...I still want there to be more art of Girl. At least then I'd have things to post in the forsaken Katawa Shoujo General threads besides ' that feel when there will never be any more art of Girl ' when I post a story about her. Dammit, Doomish, now I hav...
by Helbereth
Tue Oct 23, 2012 4:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 32
Views: 9160

Re: Girl Interpreted [Featuring... Girl!] [Updated 10/22]

Oh, I'm not pretending for even a second that Girl isn't an OC, don't worry about that. It's kind of hard not to admit she is one when she only has three lines and two sprites contained within a CG in the whole game. :lol: Plus there's the whole fact of not actually having a name. :lol: If anyone d...
by Helbereth
Tue Oct 23, 2012 4:09 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: A scenario with the one you love
Replies: 76
Views: 16631

Re: A scenario with the one you love

This kind of thing borders on roleplaying, which is nixed in a sticky elsewhere, and the concept has pretty much nothing to do with our forums. Congrats to the OP for making me agree with Silentcook. You have done the impossible. What this has to do with KS, I really can't fathom. Unless you're goi...