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by Helbereth
Sun Nov 04, 2012 9:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Replies: 186
Views: 56702

Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness

DanjaDoom wrote:bemused
You delicious bastard.
by Helbereth
Thu Nov 01, 2012 8:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 44873

Re: Upon the Precipice: A USM One-Shot

I kind of wish I knew more about Risk... I basically had to take the material as is and not supply any input on the game itself because I've literally never even seen the game board. Given that I don't like RTS games, and they're loosely based on games like Risk, I've always assumed I wouldn't find ...
by Helbereth
Thu Nov 01, 2012 12:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596645

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 10/26)

I should just take this moment to clarify that Hisao and Suzu's mother didn't go into his room, they went upstairs, presumably because it was the last place Suzu would look for them if she were to wake up. Perhaps I've read too many doujins, but, after reading this, I had some very disturbing thoug...
by Helbereth
Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take
Replies: 12
Views: 6692

Re: Katawa Shoujo: Re-Take

I have read those tips, (I think) and they're pretty much the same everywhere; "Your style is abnormal LordDarknus, this is how you do it." I'm not comfortable reading 'Lord of The Rings' despite it being accepted as Great Literature, and I seem to be the only one who is obsessed over Shakespeare's...
by Helbereth
Thu Nov 01, 2012 9:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 56
Views: 25016

Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Then again, one of your characters is stated to have green hair, and its never commented on whether or not its dyed, either :wink: Indeed. Though I think I did that simply because I was writing it into an anime world; I'm not sure I'd do that if I weren't basing the characters on that kind of unive...
by Helbereth
Thu Nov 01, 2012 9:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390653

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route

I want to be a horsey~! Oh God, mah drills! That's innuendo, right? It's a little rough and skips a lot of things that could have had subtle changes, but it's written well where you put the time. The idea that Hisao would go back to the Shanghai looking for directions made sense, though you could p...
by Helbereth
Thu Nov 01, 2012 9:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 56
Views: 25016

Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

They explain away one weird hair color while leaving the rest totally intact, which I always thought was funny. I never really thought about it, but, in my fic, Aiko wonders at the style Misha keeps her hair in -referring to them as 'ridiculous drills'- but never really wonders about the color . Ot...
by Helbereth
Wed Oct 31, 2012 1:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 56
Views: 25016

Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

She gives me a wink. "Shicchan says I'd be more aero-dy-namic if my hair were in a ponytail, so now it is~!" She pronounces 'aerodynamic' like the word has never left her lips before. I wonder if she knows what it means. This is what I LOVE about your writing. The little nitty-gritty things that yo...
by Helbereth
Wed Oct 31, 2012 1:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Akira(?!)- Terror in the Night! Conclusion Update!
Replies: 57
Views: 20685

Re: Hisao and Akira(?!)- Terror in the Night! Conclusion Upd

Hoitash wrote:Wait, what day is tomorrow? Oh crap, I gotta go buy a cake!
With pink frosting?
by Helbereth
Wed Oct 31, 2012 1:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 109894

Re: Shower Scenes

My first thought upon reading that was this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WhwbxEfy7fg so... a Love Ballad by Tony Stark featuring Hisao Timberlake? Hanako: "GIMME THAT CHRISTMAS-BOX HISAO!" yes. this smile... on my face... it's not coming off. Thanks Helbereth, now I know what to do for Hallowee...
by Helbereth
Tue Oct 30, 2012 10:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 56
Views: 25016

Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Whoops. Sometimes those slip in there. I write chapters for most of my stories live in my favorite steam group chat, both so that I can entertain the people there with the story and also receive live feedback. I've been good about cutting those out when I copy the stories over but I guess I missed ...
by Helbereth
Tue Oct 30, 2012 7:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 32
Views: 9160

Re: Girl Interpreted [Featuring... Girl!] [Updated 10/22]

I'm not sure if Karoshi can be in school. Only possibility is very selective memory problems - like he can learn new things in school just fine, but faces and names for some *handwave* reason cannot. Otherwise it would not be any point to his education. the chapter where she gets offered a contract...
by Helbereth
Tue Oct 30, 2012 6:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 56
Views: 25016

Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Po1ntBlank wrote:Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?
That's nothing! Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!
(Doomish, quick, use the neuralizer!)
by Helbereth
Tue Oct 30, 2012 1:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 109894

Re: Shower Scenes

LordDarknus wrote: I now entertain the idea of "Hisao Clause" and Hanako herself in an elf costume, together, in a room. "Sharing Gifts".
My first thought upon reading that was this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WhwbxEfy7fg
by Helbereth
Sun Oct 28, 2012 11:53 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: POLL: First girl you went for
Replies: 416
Views: 105209

Re: POLL: First girl you went for

Xanatos wrote:
thatgermankid26 wrote:Hanako's route made me feel like a rapist...

...Why? No rape occurs in any of the routes at all.
He's probably confused. Hanako sees a therapist and he probably split the word.