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by Helbereth
Fri Dec 21, 2012 10:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08

Sev'risk'avina wrote: Only criticism I can offer constructively is the couple of errors I've seen tend to be a fat finger addition. The becomes Mthe (somehow) etc.
If you could identify any such errors I'd appreciate it. I edit and re-edit a lot, so things like that slipping by is quite embarrassing.
by Helbereth
Fri Dec 21, 2012 2:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08

I'm in a similar boat right now, computer wise, cept its my video card giving me trouble. Perfect reason to upgrade, I say! Maybe now my poor Vista will be able to play Shogun 2: Total War without freezing... My poor brother just got a new graphics card (Nvidia GTX 650 Ti), but it turns out the slo...
by Helbereth
Fri Dec 21, 2012 4:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08

I suspect history will remember this Mayan Calendar hysteria as another 'Y2K' scare. You fool! You've doomed us all! Good to hear the PC trouble isn't too serious. I take it your not a big computer person though. I think I have three or four working PSU's lying about not being used at the moment. A...
by Helbereth
Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08

Borrowing someone else's computer to make a quick post. My PSU died last night, so my computer is kaput until a new one arrives. As such, I've lost access to all my document files and thus won't be able to update anything here for a while. With any luck, that will be before this coming weekend (ship...
by Helbereth
Sat Dec 08, 2012 10:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08

Nice to see this continue. Very well written as usual. The only thing that seeme da bit off was when Naoko came over. I'm still not quite certain why she did so... Well, it's okay as long as you know ;-) I never quite explained it, but she was taking a quick break from being on her feet helping Nob...
by Helbereth
Sat Dec 08, 2012 6:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Chapter 25 - Ups and Downs

IT'S ALIVE! Rumors of my demise were mostly false (mostly). After the furious pace I set publishing new chapters previously, going this long (five weeks and then some) without an update feels really weird. I'd like to offer some kind of explanation to that effect, but there are a lot of factors; ho...
by Helbereth
Mon Dec 03, 2012 10:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Banda's Wonderful Smut Compilation
Replies: 208
Views: 71913

Re: Banda's Wonderful Smut Compilation

Projectile Vomit: check Excessive Drunkenness: check Inverted Genders: check Dick-Girls: check Masturbation: check Sleep-Rape: check Ropes: check Did I miss anything? Honestly, this wasn't excessive enough when compared to your earlier work. The rape theme is also kind of a downer... but that's subj...
by Helbereth
Sat Nov 17, 2012 1:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Who Goes There?
Replies: 14
Views: 6537

Re: Who Goes There?

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by Helbereth
Wed Nov 14, 2012 2:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Helbereth's Short Shorts
Replies: 28
Views: 18594

Re: Helbereth's Short Shorts

Admittedly, I was aiming at the sort of internal thought process for the beginning rather than an actual story element. The presented challenge was to write a character as their male (opposite gender, rather) counterpart, which I never actually specify in the story. I have to admit I have no idea w...
by Helbereth
Wed Nov 14, 2012 8:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Helbereth's Short Shorts
Replies: 28
Views: 18594

Re: Helbereth's Short Shorts

Short shorts is right. I like the concept of pieces this short, just big enough to relay a thought or squeeze in a story, but small and compressed enough to be meaningful throughout every sentence, every word even. It also appeals to my love for bite sized things that take little of my time. I've s...
by Helbereth
Tue Nov 13, 2012 10:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Helbereth's Short Shorts
Replies: 28
Views: 18594

Lilly Remembers

Index Lilly Remembers Floating in a well of darkness, I feel naked and alone, drifting through a soundless vacuum. Whatever I had been doing, I can't remember. The only way I know I'm still alive is the thrum of my own pulse racing through my ears and the steady breaths that pass in and out despite...
by Helbereth
Tue Nov 13, 2012 10:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Helbereth's Short Shorts
Replies: 28
Views: 18594

Misha's Midnight Encounter

Index Misha's Midnight Encounter My eyes shoot open as an incoherent wail echoes from the hall outside. Sitting up in bed, I stare at the door like I might be able to see through it, but that's just silly. The dark walls make the open window stand out, the sky beyond covered with a foggy haze. Hear...
by Helbereth
Tue Nov 13, 2012 10:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Helbereth's Short Shorts
Replies: 28
Views: 18594

Walking With Miki

Index Walking with Miki Takashi needs to die. Whatever the hell was I thinking, listening to advice from that pretentious twerp was definitely a mistake. Maybe it's not really his fault, but after spending half this evening apologizing for being so stupid, I need someone to blame. She's still here,...
by Helbereth
Tue Nov 13, 2012 5:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596645

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 11/11)

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Helbereth wrote: his perception is skewed such that he probably sees hand-holding as a crime against decency.
In Japan, hand-holding IS a crime against decency.
At least for many people.
That's completely ridiculous.
by Helbereth
Mon Nov 12, 2012 7:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596645

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 11/11)

Having the letter arrive this late is a little odd, but 4LS hardly paid any attention to a reasonable timeline, so I'm not gonna hold it against you. The brief scene where Shizune and Misha discover Suzu in Hisao's room was worth the continuity flux, along with the later uncomfortable moment in clas...