If you could identify any such errors I'd appreciate it. I edit and re-edit a lot, so things like that slipping by is quite embarrassing.Sev'risk'avina wrote: Only criticism I can offer constructively is the couple of errors I've seen tend to be a fat finger addition. The becomes Mthe (somehow) etc.
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- Fri Dec 21, 2012 10:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08
- Fri Dec 21, 2012 2:46 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08
I'm in a similar boat right now, computer wise, cept its my video card giving me trouble. Perfect reason to upgrade, I say! Maybe now my poor Vista will be able to play Shogun 2: Total War without freezing... My poor brother just got a new graphics card (Nvidia GTX 650 Ti), but it turns out the slo...
- Fri Dec 21, 2012 4:33 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08
I suspect history will remember this Mayan Calendar hysteria as another 'Y2K' scare. You fool! You've doomed us all! Good to hear the PC trouble isn't too serious. I take it your not a big computer person though. I think I have three or four working PSU's lying about not being used at the moment. A...
- Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08
Borrowing someone else's computer to make a quick post. My PSU died last night, so my computer is kaput until a new one arrives. As such, I've lost access to all my document files and thus won't be able to update anything here for a while. With any luck, that will be before this coming weekend (ship...
- Sat Dec 08, 2012 10:49 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08
Nice to see this continue. Very well written as usual. The only thing that seeme da bit off was when Naoko came over. I'm still not quite certain why she did so... Well, it's okay as long as you know ;-) I never quite explained it, but she was taking a quick break from being on her feet helping Nob...
- Sat Dec 08, 2012 6:17 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Chapter 25 - Ups and Downs
IT'S ALIVE! Rumors of my demise were mostly false (mostly). After the furious pace I set publishing new chapters previously, going this long (five weeks and then some) without an update feels really weird. I'd like to offer some kind of explanation to that effect, but there are a lot of factors; ho...
- Mon Dec 03, 2012 10:33 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Banda's Wonderful Smut Compilation
- Replies: 208
- Views: 71913
Re: Banda's Wonderful Smut Compilation
Projectile Vomit: check Excessive Drunkenness: check Inverted Genders: check Dick-Girls: check Masturbation: check Sleep-Rape: check Ropes: check Did I miss anything? Honestly, this wasn't excessive enough when compared to your earlier work. The rape theme is also kind of a downer... but that's subj...
- Sat Nov 17, 2012 1:30 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Who Goes There?
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6537
- Wed Nov 14, 2012 2:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Helbereth's Short Shorts
- Replies: 28
- Views: 18594
Re: Helbereth's Short Shorts
Admittedly, I was aiming at the sort of internal thought process for the beginning rather than an actual story element. The presented challenge was to write a character as their male (opposite gender, rather) counterpart, which I never actually specify in the story. I have to admit I have no idea w...
- Wed Nov 14, 2012 8:44 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Helbereth's Short Shorts
- Replies: 28
- Views: 18594
Re: Helbereth's Short Shorts
Short shorts is right. I like the concept of pieces this short, just big enough to relay a thought or squeeze in a story, but small and compressed enough to be meaningful throughout every sentence, every word even. It also appeals to my love for bite sized things that take little of my time. I've s...
- Tue Nov 13, 2012 10:53 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Helbereth's Short Shorts
- Replies: 28
- Views: 18594
Lilly Remembers
Index Lilly Remembers Floating in a well of darkness, I feel naked and alone, drifting through a soundless vacuum. Whatever I had been doing, I can't remember. The only way I know I'm still alive is the thrum of my own pulse racing through my ears and the steady breaths that pass in and out despite...
- Tue Nov 13, 2012 10:51 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Helbereth's Short Shorts
- Replies: 28
- Views: 18594
Misha's Midnight Encounter
Index Misha's Midnight Encounter My eyes shoot open as an incoherent wail echoes from the hall outside. Sitting up in bed, I stare at the door like I might be able to see through it, but that's just silly. The dark walls make the open window stand out, the sky beyond covered with a foggy haze. Hear...
- Tue Nov 13, 2012 10:50 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Helbereth's Short Shorts
- Replies: 28
- Views: 18594
Walking With Miki
Index Walking with Miki Takashi needs to die. Whatever the hell was I thinking, listening to advice from that pretentious twerp was definitely a mistake. Maybe it's not really his fault, but after spending half this evening apologizing for being so stupid, I need someone to blame. She's still here,...
- Tue Nov 13, 2012 5:03 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 912
- Views: 596645
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 11/11)
That's completely ridiculous.Mirage_GSM wrote:In Japan, hand-holding IS a crime against decency.Helbereth wrote: his perception is skewed such that he probably sees hand-holding as a crime against decency.
At least for many people.
- Mon Nov 12, 2012 7:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 912
- Views: 596645
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 11/11)
Having the letter arrive this late is a little odd, but 4LS hardly paid any attention to a reasonable timeline, so I'm not gonna hold it against you. The brief scene where Shizune and Misha discover Suzu in Hisao's room was worth the continuity flux, along with the later uncomfortable moment in clas...