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by Helbereth
Fri Feb 15, 2013 1:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 44873

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Valentine's Day Update

>Yuri

...NOPE!

Glad you had Banda look at it instead of me because I'd tend to lose my objectivity.

Still, one of you should have caught the your/you're mistakes... Next time edit with your pants on, maybe? =)

I'll stop now... cheers!
by Helbereth
Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 02/14/2013

hawkeye77th wrote:What a great birthday present!
Happy birthday!
(I assume it's your birthday)
by Helbereth
Fri Feb 15, 2013 10:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 02/14/2013

Organ harvesters. Organ harvesters... organ harvesters. Organ. Harvesters. Is that a reference? Sort of yes and sort of no... I had a scene from Jay and Silent Bob Strike Back playing in my head while writing that conversation. Beyond that, it's idle chatter; the kind of lucid thought someone has w...
by Helbereth
Thu Feb 14, 2013 4:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Act 3 - Melody; Chapter 27 - A July Hisao

Valentines Day; It seems appropriate to begin Act 4 on this day of all days. Believe me I didn't plan for the date to line up like this, but sometimes fate is kind and deals us a hand worth playing - or at least using to bluff. Previous | Next ________________________________________________ Act 3 ...
by Helbereth
Wed Feb 06, 2013 3:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favorite "Does not have a role in the game" girls
Replies: 33
Views: 7562

Re: Favorite "Does not have a role in the game" girls

No love for Rika? Weird.
by Helbereth
Mon Jan 28, 2013 3:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 66474

Re: Freaks and Friends

Lack of depth reception is still something I haven't gotten the hang of and it shows. I think you meant 'depth perception'. Reception is something you get on an analog radio (I'm not sure if those might be completely out of date now), perception is something your eyes do. Little slow on the reactio...
by Helbereth
Sat Jan 26, 2013 1:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sun Blind (OC x Molly) - Updated February 2nd
Replies: 44
Views: 15892

Re: Sun Blind (OC x Molly)

I think honorifics can add a lot of characterization to a story if done right. Probldm iy it's pretty hard to get right... I'd say it's next to impossible to use them right. Whenever I see them in a story, it feels like somebody didn't finish translating the story into English. Usually it just feel...
by Helbereth
Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 01/23/2013

A lovely chapter. I'm happy to be leaving the beach house too. But you have dashed my hopes that there would be at least one of these dang pseudo-routes that did NOT have a decision point in it. :? Originally I hadn't planned to have any such divergences, but, as I wrote, I decided to challenge mys...
by Helbereth
Wed Jan 23, 2013 6:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Chapter 26 - Fireworks (part 2)

Continued here: Previous | Part 1 _______________________________________ Turning a steely gaze at Hisao, Amaya's face goes from excitement to dissent in no time flat. As I recall, Hisao claimed no complicity in this fireworks fiasco, and I believed him; as did Amaya. Looking toward him as he stands...
by Helbereth
Wed Jan 23, 2013 6:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Chapter 26 - Fireworks (part 1)

Well, this took longer than I expected. After much deliberation, self-loathing and repeated rewrites, I've finally figured out how this chapter needed to go, and it only took since November (yeah, it's been that long) to get it right. Another lengthy chapter, it's split into two posts like I normal...
by Helbereth
Sat Jan 12, 2013 3:37 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Kenji Goes Ape
Replies: 9
Views: 5828

Re: Kenji Goes Ape

Ryan von Steiner wrote:I didn't watch Planet of the Apes, but I know enough of it that you're parodying the ending.

Also Shizune?
Kenji is blaming Feminists.

I assumed Shizune would be leading them.

Hence it's a giant statue of her.
by Helbereth
Fri Dec 28, 2012 8:09 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Kenji Goes Ape
Replies: 9
Views: 5828

Re: Kenji Goes Ape

Have we hit a generation that hasn't seen Planet of the Apes?
by Helbereth
Tue Dec 25, 2012 3:58 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Best use of Side Characters
Replies: 58
Views: 13268

Re: Best use of Side Characters

Shizune's or Rin's. This. Also, Lilly is NOT a side character, @Dream. For the purpose of anyone else's route, she is; even in Hanako's she's a secondary character at most. The same thing goes for any of the other girls in relation to the 'main' girl in the route you're reading. The only time when ...
by Helbereth
Tue Dec 25, 2012 3:54 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482602

Re: Ask!

Nobody on the dev team suffers from any disabilities related to the game (well, as far as I know). Unless we count development-induced insomnia/sleep paralysis, sudden BP increases, incontrollable foaming at the mouth, and other such ailments. :) >incontrollable Aren't you their editor? For shame. ...
by Helbereth
Tue Dec 25, 2012 3:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596645

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/15)

Perhaps, but given the context of Shizune in the story I have a hard time seeing Suzu thinking Shizune would put up with her. Desperation is an amazing thing sometimes, so hmmm, maybe. If you noticed in the final scene as they're leaving the Student Council room, Suzu is realizing Shizune isn't qui...