>Yuri
...NOPE!
Glad you had Banda look at it instead of me because I'd tend to lose my objectivity.
Still, one of you should have caught the your/you're mistakes... Next time edit with your pants on, maybe? =)
I'll stop now... cheers!
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- Fri Feb 15, 2013 1:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
- Replies: 114
- Views: 44873
- Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 02/14/2013
Happy birthday!hawkeye77th wrote:What a great birthday present!
(I assume it's your birthday)
- Fri Feb 15, 2013 10:26 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 02/14/2013
Organ harvesters. Organ harvesters... organ harvesters. Organ. Harvesters. Is that a reference? Sort of yes and sort of no... I had a scene from Jay and Silent Bob Strike Back playing in my head while writing that conversation. Beyond that, it's idle chatter; the kind of lucid thought someone has w...
- Thu Feb 14, 2013 4:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Act 3 - Melody; Chapter 27 - A July Hisao
Valentines Day; It seems appropriate to begin Act 4 on this day of all days. Believe me I didn't plan for the date to line up like this, but sometimes fate is kind and deals us a hand worth playing - or at least using to bluff. Previous | Next ________________________________________________ Act 3 ...
- Wed Feb 06, 2013 3:03 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Favorite "Does not have a role in the game" girls
- Replies: 33
- Views: 7562
Re: Favorite "Does not have a role in the game" girls
No love for Rika? Weird.
- Mon Jan 28, 2013 3:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Freaks and Friends
- Replies: 171
- Views: 66474
Re: Freaks and Friends
Lack of depth reception is still something I haven't gotten the hang of and it shows. I think you meant 'depth perception'. Reception is something you get on an analog radio (I'm not sure if those might be completely out of date now), perception is something your eyes do. Little slow on the reactio...
- Sat Jan 26, 2013 1:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sun Blind (OC x Molly) - Updated February 2nd
- Replies: 44
- Views: 15892
Re: Sun Blind (OC x Molly)
I think honorifics can add a lot of characterization to a story if done right. Probldm iy it's pretty hard to get right... I'd say it's next to impossible to use them right. Whenever I see them in a story, it feels like somebody didn't finish translating the story into English. Usually it just feel...
- Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 01/23/2013
A lovely chapter. I'm happy to be leaving the beach house too. But you have dashed my hopes that there would be at least one of these dang pseudo-routes that did NOT have a decision point in it. :? Originally I hadn't planned to have any such divergences, but, as I wrote, I decided to challenge mys...
- Wed Jan 23, 2013 6:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Chapter 26 - Fireworks (part 2)
Continued here: Previous | Part 1 _______________________________________ Turning a steely gaze at Hisao, Amaya's face goes from excitement to dissent in no time flat. As I recall, Hisao claimed no complicity in this fireworks fiasco, and I believed him; as did Amaya. Looking toward him as he stands...
- Wed Jan 23, 2013 6:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Chapter 26 - Fireworks (part 1)
Well, this took longer than I expected. After much deliberation, self-loathing and repeated rewrites, I've finally figured out how this chapter needed to go, and it only took since November (yeah, it's been that long) to get it right. Another lengthy chapter, it's split into two posts like I normal...
- Sat Jan 12, 2013 3:37 am
- Forum: Fan Art
- Topic: Kenji Goes Ape
- Replies: 9
- Views: 5828
Re: Kenji Goes Ape
Kenji is blaming Feminists.Ryan von Steiner wrote:I didn't watch Planet of the Apes, but I know enough of it that you're parodying the ending.
Also Shizune?
I assumed Shizune would be leading them.
Hence it's a giant statue of her.
- Fri Dec 28, 2012 8:09 am
- Forum: Fan Art
- Topic: Kenji Goes Ape
- Replies: 9
- Views: 5828
Re: Kenji Goes Ape
Have we hit a generation that hasn't seen Planet of the Apes?
- Tue Dec 25, 2012 3:58 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Best use of Side Characters
- Replies: 58
- Views: 13268
Re: Best use of Side Characters
Shizune's or Rin's. This. Also, Lilly is NOT a side character, @Dream. For the purpose of anyone else's route, she is; even in Hanako's she's a secondary character at most. The same thing goes for any of the other girls in relation to the 'main' girl in the route you're reading. The only time when ...
- Tue Dec 25, 2012 3:54 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Ask!
- Replies: 4980
- Views: 1482602
Re: Ask!
Nobody on the dev team suffers from any disabilities related to the game (well, as far as I know). Unless we count development-induced insomnia/sleep paralysis, sudden BP increases, incontrollable foaming at the mouth, and other such ailments. :) >incontrollable Aren't you their editor? For shame. ...
- Tue Dec 25, 2012 3:44 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 912
- Views: 596645
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/15)
Perhaps, but given the context of Shizune in the story I have a hard time seeing Suzu thinking Shizune would put up with her. Desperation is an amazing thing sometimes, so hmmm, maybe. If you noticed in the final scene as they're leaving the Student Council room, Suzu is realizing Shizune isn't qui...