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Well, this was much faster than expected. Only eight days later I have another chapter finished, and it's a long one (such that it's split in two posts). My own neurosis prevented me from posting this yesterday, and I'm glad I took the time to do some peer review to work out a few little kinks (tha...

That this isn't an attempt to end the series by putting the cast in some astronomically implausible situation that doesn't fit the tone of the series at all while not providing any real closure. You don't want him to "Seinfeld" it, I gather? It seems more like he's having fun throwing the character...

Sex and the City My entire perception of you has changed... In other news, I just caught up on this, reading through the entire golfing escapade and the new cable fiasco this-evening while I'm stalling at publishing my new chapter. My only issue is that this latest chapter seems altogether implausi...

Okay, I was going to comment on this earlier but I got sidetracked. This seems like an introspective chapter that basically boils down to informing the reader of Hitomi's inexperience at living on her own. It's shaky in a few places, and there are some details left out that she seems to know, but do...

Suppose Mike I. is Mike Inel, the guy who did the animated sequences for KS? Considering the backdrop on the site and all... Please clarify, I know who Mike Inel is. Well, the backdrop on the site is some of his art, and I know he does some writing. If he wrote that, I know he most certainly knows ...

Suppose Mike I. is Mike Inel, the guy who did the animated sequences for KS? Considering the backdrop on the site and all...

I liked the full circle book ending you went with(started with a room visit of Miki taking a scared Suzu out, and ended with a room visit of Hisao taking a scared Suzu out). It did it's task rather well. Ah~ I've been in the habit of checking the forums for nearly a year just to read your newest ch...

He lives! Well it only took half as long this time! But, yeah, I've disappeared for the last couple weeks. The plot thickens. Sparks of doubt are smoldering, it seems. Here and there, yeah. Don't get too excited, though. They just got back from the beach, immediately dove into finals stress, and ar...

Well, at least it hasn't been too terribly long (2 and 1/2 weeks or so) since I posted the previous chapter. Without spoiling anything, all I'll say here is that I enjoyed having to read back through previous sections of the story so I could get the logistics right. Coming back to Yamaku and rememb...

I have to admit I'm guilty of this. When I go back and read my OC story now, all I see is the original cast of KS hacked apart and their various personality traits sewn onto characters with flimsy backstories and different appearances. For instance, my Naomi is essentially a Mishanako, while Miko i...

Why not have your character transfer from another class, or hell, have the story be about a group of original characters in a class yet unseen? Considering this is almost, to the letter, exactly what I set out to accomplish, allow me to elaborate. I did the math once before, and I'm not particularl...

Well, now I feel like I'm left a little out in the cold as far as the long-standing stories here go, but I'll manage. *ahem* Having started reading this back when I first joined the boards, it's at least partially responsible for inspiring me to write, so I thank you for that. There are still things...

Potentially stupid question: Since you are are doing a route split, how are you planing to keeping a good level of interest in the second one? I know that in some like this there can be long passages that are basically copy-pasted with a word or two changed here and there. Plans to deal with this? ...

This is script fic. Misha: Hi, I'm Misha. Don't do this. This is better. "Hi, I'm Misha," said Misha. But we can still do better than that. Let's toss in a simple adverb to describe HOW the character is saying something. "Hi, I'm Misha," said Misha happily. Now you not only have the character and t...

This many days after the update was posted, I'm surprised to find Mirage is still the only reply. Though, now I suppose I should count my own... Regardless, when I read the beginning of this back in... June? July...? Something like that. Anyway, this is one of the more thoughtful re-imaginings of th...