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Elaborating further: Because the setting has been done into the ground. Because high school is actually really fucking boring. Because the idea that high school is THE MOST IMPORTANT YEARS OF YOUR LIFE is fucking dumb. Because there are literally thousands of other ideas out there that are more int...

Florentine wrote:So many caring members....I do not even know how to speak my gratitude anymore

Derision, sarcasm and insults seem to be the most common responses, but I may only be speaking from personal experience.

I need to start up on this story again, huh? Based on the responses, I think that would be appreciated. Like griffon8 said, though, the decision to do so is entirely your prerogative. Personally, I'm rather fond of your writing no matter the format, so I'd be just as tickled if you decided to focus...

Joonwoo wrote:The recent one was such a downer D;

Welcome to the forums, firstly; that appears to have been your first post.

I can't do much more than nod and agree with your brief assessment, though. They don't all end on high notes.

I stumbled on this when I went looking for Taro's last name because of... reasons. In any case, I like the duplicity Miki shows in this, and how it's actually Taro doing all the inspiring speeches; it's a nice bit of role reversal. My one issue is that I find it somewhat difficult differentiating Mi...

I TRIED to stay the fuck away, but you people made me do it. Well thats pretty....impressive. I don't know. With my own feeble writing skills on display here, I just don't feel that I have room to criticize other peoples work. You may feel that way, but, in a community such as this, filled with ama...

-Funny, cause it seems like we have a different definition for erotica huh? Cause from where I came from, the use of vulgar language degrades it into a cheap porno. Well, different strokes for different folks, I guess The trick with writing a sex scene is knowing when to be subtle and when to be ab...

Chap 2 was also written only 4 days in interval which means that it will surely be worse than Chap 1. Every artist should refuel for creativity can be exhausted, a rule which he violated. But ill still check it out for a while :| Also,im not a beginning reader. :( Creativity, you'll find, comes in ...

Rin's "Proof of Existence" ending (the one that ends in the flower field). I know it sounds unlikely, but I seem to have a knack for finding the 'good' answers. Arguably the Rin endings are debatable in their relative level of good and bad, but the flower field is considered the good ending while th...

I checked them out, while not bad, still not my thing. They do not even know how to foreplay and set up an ambiance. The Akira story also freaked me out. Femdom is a good genre, but his Akira was a brute. I did warn you about that. There's a full spectrum of oddities here, as anywhere else, and not...

If I were to suggest anything, it would be to do more reading, especially in the genre you're attempting to write. -Any Suggestions? Lushstories has ALOT of awful members that the ads seems to be much more enjoyable than the actual stories written. Literotica has an awful layout, dead interfacing a...

Great. Now I can't help but picture Miyagi with a moustache. A hawk with a moustache. And on the topic of birds of prey, there's a very distinct and very loud "FALCON PAUUUUNCH" accompanying the slap, in my head. Because why not? Is it bad that I described Miyagi almost as the spitting image of my ...

DAMN! First review was about a small but tragic mistake :x Anyway, im surprised you said nothing about the sex scene If I have nothing nice to say, I usually try to keep my mouth shut. However, since you asked, barely a few sentences in, I was ready to close the page out of contempt. The imagery yo...

There are two l's in Lilly.

Previous | Part 1 | Next Chapter ___________________________________________________ The door is somewhat distant, but I hear the hinges creak and I turn to see Hisao stepping out onto the sunlit roof with a blank expression. It takes a second for him to notice me as I've gotten down near the far e...